"Why do you need to talk to them?"
"You seem to enjoy their company more than mine."
"Are you cheating on me?"
"I saw how you looked at them."
"Why did they text you?"
"You never laugh like that with me."
"Who were you with last night?"
"You’re always so secretive with your phone."
"I bet you’re hiding something from me."
"I don’t trust your friends."
"Why did you stay out so late?"
"Who is more important to you, me or them?"
"You never make time for us anymore."
"Are they more interesting than me?"
"You didn’t tell me you were meeting them."
"I feel like you’re replacing me."
"Why do you need to dress up for them?"
"Are you trying to impress someone else?"
"Why didn’t you invite me?"
"I bet you wish you were with them instead."
joyful
cheerful
delighted
ecstatic
elated
jubilant
content
pleased
satisfied
thrilled
blissful
overjoyed
gleeful
merry
upbeat
buoyant
radiant
sunny
euphoric
exuberant
This masterlist will host the links to the posts and threads I've saved as writing resources. None of them are mine - all the credits go to the amazing people who made them.
Author, Narrator, Protagonist, Hero... Who is What ?
Creating Black Characters With Intent
Flaws to Give to Your Characters
How to Write a Character Who's in Pain
Open Letter from a Poc for People Who Are Writing Characters of Colour
Questions for Crafting Problematic Characters
Top-Tier Villain Motivations
Fantasy Guide to Education
Reasons Why Can't Your Characters Use Magic To Fix Everything
Some Locations and Structures to Include in Your Forest
What No One Tells You About Writing Fantasy
A quick Guide to Animal Symbolism
Differences Between UK and USA Military Dog Tags
How Boat Pronouns Work
Medical Facts that are Commonly Overlooked
Realistic Travel Time
Slater's Impromptu List of Military Reference Material
The Symbolism of Flowers
How to Write Creepy Stories
Most Common Character Flaws in Horror Fiction
"Never Were" and "Used to Be" Monsters
Resources About Survival in the Wild
How to Make Your Writing Less Stiff
Pep-Talk - You Are Allowed to Be Proud of What You Write + List of YT Channels and Amazon Links for Writing
Write Smarter, Not Harder
Aesthetic Words to Fill Up Your Vocabulary
Bilingual Characters - German Edition
CoD - Spanish for Ale and Rudy Fics
IRL Operator Phrases/Terms - USA Edition
Gemstone Colors
German Pet Names
List of Wikipedia Articles - British and American Words and Differences
Scottish Phrases and Words for Soap MacTavish (or Scottish Characters in general)
On Using Words that Indicate Sounds and Tones for Dialogues
A Guide to Write a Mancunian Accent
Growled, Roared, Snarled, Etc... A Brief Description
Backup Your Tumblr Blog
Disable Recall for Microsoft's Copilot+ PCs
Protect Your Stories on AO3
@deception-united - I love the resources this person shares ! They have a masterpost that lists their useful posts, but they also complete some of these posts as answers to asks and reblog a lot of other resources.
@leisureflame - This blog has a lot of resources, advice and prompts ! The author also offers to help with other people's struggles too, which is immensely wholesome in itself.
@writers-potion - This blog has tons of amazing posts to help writers with their research. I keep coming back to it, and highly recommend checking it out ! Here are this person's extremely useful Masterpost (1) and Masterpost (2).
academy
adventurer's guild
alchemist
apiary
apothecary
aquarium
armory
art gallery
bakery
bank
barber
barracks
bathhouse
blacksmith
boathouse
book store
bookbinder
botanical garden
brothel
butcher
carpenter
cartographer
casino
castle
cobbler
coffee shop
council chamber
court house
crypt for the noble family
dentist
distillery
docks
dovecot
dyer
embassy
farmer's market
fighting pit
fishmonger
fortune teller
gallows
gatehouse
general store
graveyard
greenhouses
guard post
guildhall
gymnasium
haberdashery
haunted house
hedge maze
herbalist
hospice
hospital
house for sale
inn
jail
jeweller
kindergarten
leatherworker
library
locksmith
mail courier
manor house
market
mayor's house
monastery
morgue
museum
music shop
observatory
orchard
orphanage
outhouse
paper maker
pawnshop
pet shop
potion shop
potter
printmaker
quest board
residence
restricted zone
sawmill
school
scribe
sewer entrance
sheriff's office
shrine
silversmith
spa
speakeasy
spice merchant
sports stadium
stables
street market
tailor
tannery
tavern
tax collector
tea house
temple
textile shop
theatre
thieves guild
thrift store
tinker's workshop
town crier post
town square
townhall
toy store
trinket shop
warehouse
watchtower
water mill
weaver
well
windmill
wishing well
wizard tower
This wan’t how I intended to re-enter the public eye, although frankly I hadn’t intended to go public at all after the operation was shut down. Sure, I had fantasized about it, but I’d never really wanted the attention to begin with, and the politics involved were always a mess. I stood in the aisle, leaning against the armrest of a middle-aged woman’s seat, breathing heavily. The hair on the back of my neck prickled, warning me about the other passengers watching me. Something warm and wet trickled off my lip and dripped onto the floor. I swiped at my nose with the back of my hand, unsurprised to see blood. I had pushed myself too far, used up more energy in two minutes than I had in the past five years. But it was flowing back to me, and it felt good.
The plane shuddered and lurched as we were towed off the landing strip and toward the gate. Pushing myself upright, I stumbled back to my seat. The eyes of the other passengers followed me, and I could see a mix of relief, confusion, and fear on their faces as I passed. The oxygen masks had deployed during the chaos, and they swung in unison, like choreographed dancers. A toddler was wailing over the hum of the airplane systems, and the lights of the airstrip flickered in through the windows as the plane jostled towards the gate.
When I reached my seat I rummaged through the seat back pocket, pulling out an ancient mp3 player, headphones, and my wallet. I stuffed them into my jeans and pulled my backpack out from under the seat in front of mine. The empty plastic water bottle in the side pouch got caught on something and flew spinning up the aisle. The cockpit door banged open, making me jump, and the pilot barreled out. His eyes met mine and he strode down the aisle, disbelief and anger staining his cheeks. He opened his mouth to scream at me, but I’d already had enough of him.
“No,” I held up my hand to stop him and his mouth snapped closed and he stopped halfway down the aisle. He turned even redder, furious, but unable to move or speak. The co-pilot poked his head out after the pilot, and looked nervously at me. “Good. We’re all here.” I straightened up. “Attention everyone, I need everyone’s attention please.” I knew everyone was already looking at me, but I needed the extra few seconds to steady my nerves. “The feds are going to come talk to you.” I added more power to my voice, pulling my audience in. “You will tell them everything you saw. You will tell them the truth, but you may not tell anyone else. After tonight, you will only remember that there was a dangerous malfunction, and this brave pilot,” I gestured to the copilot, still standing by the cockpit door, “managed to get us all here in one piece. He’s a real hero, and you are all very grateful to him. You will forget my face, forget that I was on this flight, and forget what I did.” I zipped up my jacket and swung my backpack onto my shoulder.
The other passengers and staff looked glassy-eyed, and some of them shook their heads, as they fought my orders. I took a deep breath, pulling more power from my core. It surged through my body, like electricity, crackling over my nose and stopping the flow of blood. I stepped into the air and willed myself up and away, phasing through the ceiling of the small plane. I hovered there, in the freezing January air, breathing puffy white clouds. Swirling my power around me in a protective cocoon, I felt it shielding me from the wind and obscuring me from view. I pulled out my phone, powered it on, and dialed a familiar number.
“Smith.”
“Hey, there was an incident. Everyone’s ok, but the Department is going to want to come handle this one.”
“Erin? Erin, you need to come in. The director has questions.”
“The director wants to put me in a cage. You know I can’t come back, not after what I did.”
“Let’s talk about this.”
“I know you have to try to get me back, but please just listen. Someone came after me. Someone who knows about the project. I’m the last loose end, and someone is trying to clean me up. We both know that won’t work, but I can’t let other people get hurt in the crossfire, not again.” I glanced at the emergency crews swarming the plane, illuminated by blinding spot lights.
“Erin, listen…”
“Vegas airport. You have until midnight before they lose their memories, although I’m not sure how good of a job I did, so you might do some cursory exit interviews. Don’t bother with the phone, I’ll leave it here for you.”
“Erin, I’m so sorry about what happened. You were kids. You didn’t deserve that.”
“I know.” I knew this was a a ploy to keep me on the line, but there was real remorse behind those words, pain even. I snapped the phone closed. It was a cheap plastic flip phone that I only carried for emergencies. I let it go and it floated beside me, components disassembling themselves and dropping to the ground. I snapped the chips into several pieces, and the wind carried them off. Might as well make it a challenge for them. I pulled out my wallet, removing the driver’s license I used to buy my plane ticket and dropping it to fly away with the bits of my phone. I had liked being Sam Davis, but they would cross check the passenger list with the people who got off the plane as well as the security footage at the airport. It was time to pay a visit to Luca. I sucked in a deep breath of the cold night air, and vanished.
Determine the type of signal you need.
Select from that signal group the word which is most appropriate to the meaning of your sentences.
Note: The same transition word or phrase can sometimes serve different purposes.
in addition, furthermore, moreover, also, equally important, likewise, another, again
for example, for instance, thus, in other words, as an illustration, in particular
for this purpose, to this end, with this objective in mind
indeed, truly, again, to repeat, in fact
while it may be true, in spite of this
in summary, in conclusion, therefore, finally, consequently, accordingly, in short, in brief, as a result, on the whole, thus
Value sequence: first, second, secondly, third, thirdly, next, last, finally
Time sequence: then, afterward, next, subsequently, previously, first, second, at last, meanwhile, in the meantime, immediately, soon, at length, yesterday
Space sequence: above, across, under, beyond, below, nearby, nearer, opposite to, adjacent to, to the left/right, in the foreground, in the background
Similarity: similarly, likewise, in like manner
Contrast: in contrast to, however, but, still, nevertheless, yet, conversely, notwithstanding, on the other hand, on the contrary, at the same time, while this may be true
Cause and Effect: consequently, thus, therefore, accordingly, hence, as a result
accordingly, as a result, at the same time, besides, equally important, in fact, otherwise, therefore
also, at the same time, in like manner, in the same way, likewise, similarly, so too
but, however, in contrast with, instead, nevertheless, on the contrary, on the other hand, otherwise, yet
I don’t post writing tips myself very much anymore, but a very easy manuscript polishing tip is to do a search for the -ness suffix, and then replace the word with a more appropriate noun.
Quickness? Switch it to “speed.”
Tenseness? Try “tension.”
Easiness? I think you mean “ease.”
Even words like sadness can sometimes be traded for something more precise. Like what kind of sadness? Would disappointment be better? Melancholy? Even just “emotion,” and then add in another detail that helps the reader understand they’re sad?
**Using the word ‘said’ is absolutely not a bad choice, and in fact, you will want to use it for at least 40% of all your dialogue tags. Using other words can be great, especially for description and showing emotion, but used in excess can take away or distract from the story.
Neutral: acknowledged, added, affirmed, agreed, announced, answered, appealed, articulated, attested, began, bemused, boasted, called, chimed in, claimed, clarified, commented, conceded, confided, confirmed, contended, continued, corrected, decided, declared, deflected, demurred, disclosed, disputed, emphasized, explained, expressed, finished, gloated, greeted, hinted, imitated, imparted, implied, informed, interjected, insinuated, insisted, instructed, lectured, maintained, mouthed, mused, noted, observed, offered, put forth, reassured, recited, remarked, repeated, requested, replied, revealed, shared, spoke up, stated, suggested, uttered, voiced, volunteered, vowed, went on
Persuasive: advised, appealed, asserted, assured, begged, cajoled, claimed, convinced, directed, encouraged, implored, insisted, pleaded, pressed, probed, prodded, prompted, stressed, suggested, urged
Continuously: babbled, chattered, jabbered, rambled, rattled on
Quietly: admitted, breathed, confessed, croaked, crooned, grumbled, hissed, mumbled, murmured, muttered, purred, sighed, whispered
Loudly: bellowed, blurted, boomed, cried, hollered, howled, piped, roared, screamed, screeched, shouted, shrieked, squawked, thundered, wailed, yelled, yelped
Happily/Lovingly: admired, beamed, cackled, cheered, chirped, comforted, consoled, cooed, empathized, flirted, gushed, hummed, invited, praised, proclaimed, professed, reassured, soothed, squealed, whooped
Humour: bantered, chuckled, giggled, guffawed, jested, joked, joshed
Sad: bawled, begged, bemoaned, blubbered, grieved, lamented, mewled, mourned, pleaded, sniffled, sniveled, sobbed, wailed, wept, whimpered
Frustrated: argued, bickered, chastised, complained, exasperated, groaned, huffed, protested, whinged
Anger: accused, bristled, criticized, condemned, cursed, demanded, denounced, erupted, fumed, growled, lied, nagged, ordered, provoked, raged, ranted remonstrated, retorted, scoffed, scolded, scowled, seethed, shot, snapped, snarled, sneered, spat, stormed, swore, taunted, threatened, warned
Disgust: cringed, gagged, groused, griped, grunted, mocked, rasped, sniffed, snorted
Fear: cautioned, faltered, fretted, gasped, quaked, quavered, shuddered, stammered, stuttered, trembled, warned, whimpered, whined
Excited: beamed, cheered, cried out, crowed, exclaimed, gushed, rejoiced, sang, trumpeted
Surprised: blurted, exclaimed, gasped, marveled, sputtered, yelped
Provoked: bragged, dared, gibed, goaded, insulted, jeered, lied, mimicked, nagged, pestered, provoked, quipped, ribbed, ridiculed, sassed, teased
Uncertainty/Questionned: asked, challenged, coaxed, concluded, countered, debated, doubted, entreated, guessed, hesitated, hinted, implored, inquired, objected, persuaded, petitioned, pleaded, pondered, pressed, probed, proposed, queried, questioned, quizzed, reasoned, reiterated, reported, requested, speculated, supposed, surmised, testified, theorized, verified, wondered
This is by no means a full list, but should be more than enough to get you started!
Any more words you favor? Add them in the comments!
Happy Writing :)
Updated 12th July 2024 More description notes
John enjoyed each bite, the flavors bursting in his mouth like fireworks.
Jane skillfully twirled her fork, gathering a mix of flavors with every turn.
The smell of the freshly cooked meal surrounded them, exciting their taste buds before they took their first bites.
John closed his eyes in joy as he tasted the perfect blend of spices in the dish.
Jane's laughter mixed with the sound of clinking cutlery, creating a lively atmosphere at the dinner table.
The satisfying crunch filled the room as John bit into the crispy outside of the dish.
Jane's plate was colorful, with each ingredient adding to the beautiful meal.
The warm, inviting smell of home-cooked food filled the kitchen, drawing everyone to the table.
John's hunger grew with each bite, as the delicious meal celebrated great cooking.
Jane's eyes sparkled with happiness as she tasted the homemade dish, feeling transported to a place of culinary joy.
Updated 17th July 2024 More description notes
She shoved the cup to her lips and felt the warm sensation tickle her throat.
John sipped the cool drink, feeling it refresh him on a hot day.
Jane brought the cup to her lips, and the warm drink felt like a cozy hug.
The smell of the hot beverage surrounded them, promising comfort and relaxation.
John closed his eyes for a moment, enjoying the rich taste as a little indulgence.
John held his warm mug between his hands, enjoying the simple pleasure on a chilly evening.
The strong smell of fresh coffee filled the air, waking up their senses.
The first sip made John feel satisfied, a brief escape into the joy of a good drink.
Eyes brimming with unshed tears
Shoulders drooping, as if bearing a heavy weight
A quiet, almost inaudible sigh
A far-off gaze, eyes not focusing on anything specific
A faint tremor in the voice when speaking
Slow, shuffling steps
Turning away to hide one's face
Forcing a smile that doesn't reach the eyes
A hand absently tracing an old scar or memento
Slumping against a wall or sinking into a chair
Read the disclaimer. This is a work in progress, and I will post updates as I get them. Thanks for reading!
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