I Would Kind Of Love To See The Slytherins (like Barty And Regs Dorm) In First Year 😂

Okay, finished ! I did rush it, and I read quickly when I love a story. So now... I think I will ask some things to the characters. Not to many of course, I know it's hard work to you. But you are really doing great. Of course there are some flaws, but your characters are human and each of them have their own personality. I've got some troubles with Peter being this idiot, but that's mainly it. And I love Barty, very very much.

((OOC: Aww thank you!  I also love him very very much 😍))

My advice when folks are struggling with writing in the third-person omniscient is to Lemony Snicket it up. Give your omniscient narrator strong opinions about what’s going on. Don’t fall into the trap of assuming that the third-person omniscient perspective must also use the objective voice; those are two separate things, and many of the most popular and successful writers who’ve written in the third-person omniscient do not, in fact, use the objective voice.

         sorry doesn’t cut it.

Mentally exhausted and feeling like a slug

Can’t wait for Wonder Woman tonight and thank Hera it’s sounding like it’s a good movie too! Here’s a throwback to a Wonder Woman piece I made two years ago after getting tired of only seeing skinny pinups of her.