Hi,
I was wondering if any Rise fans could beta read this Leosagi fic. It’s short and incomplete, but I’m working on rewriting it soon. The purpose for me asking for a beta-reader is to see how I can improve on my writing based on narrative, grammar, or any issues that stand out. I would like good and bad feedback so I am sure on what I need to improve and what I am at least pretty good at.
I’m going to put the story link in the comments since Tumblr wont allow me to add it to the post.
Thank you!
I now introduce to you, Miyamoto Usagi! Since I've made rottmnt into humans, I thought I could try to create rottmnt Usagi as a human! I got some inspiration from Usagi Chronicles, so I hope you like his design! 🐇🩵
There they are. The mythic alt versions.
Back on my (katana)shipping bullshit (I say as I make my first ever leosagi post)
(Tomorrow I might try to get a different photo with better lighting)
Back on my (katana)shipping bullshit (I say as I make my first ever leosagi post)
(Tomorrow I might try to get a different photo with better lighting)
Sooo I headcannon that Miyamoto is at least 1 or 2 years older than the turtles (I’m not about to make bro an old man 😭) they aged down every character BUT him bro
Leo just being silly (ima color this later)
Reference
Stawwwwppppp 🤣 Not Usagi hitting the Family Guy Death Pose lol
I love this so much!
Donatello: Oh, look! Leonardo and Usagi are standing under the mistletoe.
Michelangelo: [Eyes widen in panic.] Oh no!
Donatello: [Rolls his eyes and crosses his arms.] Come on, Mikey. Grow up. It’s about time Leo—
Michelangelo: [Frantically waves his hands, interrupting Donatello.] Not that! Raph told Leo that it’s tradition in Usagi’s dimension, when you stand under the mistletoe—
[Leonardo abruptly snap kicks Usagi in the face mid-lean, knocking him back. Then he turns to his brothers, giving them a thumbs-up like he just nailed the perfect kata.]
Michelangelo: [Facepalms.] —you fight them.
Raphael: [Leaning against the wall, snickering.] I call it ‘mistlefoe’.
[Leonardo, oblivious to the chaos, glances up at the mistletoe again, prepared to defend his honor from any other "attackers."]
Donatello: Oh, look! Leonardo and Usagi are standing under the mistletoe.
Michelangelo: [Eyes widen in panic.] Oh no!
Donatello: [Rolls his eyes and crosses his arms.] Come on, Mikey. Grow up. It’s about time Leo—
Michelangelo: [Frantically waves his hands, interrupting Donatello.] Not that! Raph told Leo that it’s tradition in Usagi’s dimension, when you stand under the mistletoe—
[Leonardo abruptly snap kicks Usagi in the face mid-lean, knocking him back. Then he turns to his brothers, giving them a thumbs-up like he just nailed the perfect kata.]
Michelangelo: [Facepalms.] —you fight them.
Raphael: [Leaning against the wall, snickering.] I call it ‘mistlefoe’.
[Leonardo, oblivious to the chaos, glances up at the mistletoe again, prepared to defend his honor from any other "attackers."]
Random Person: “Do you still think that Leonardo and Usagi should have gotten a rematch in the Battle Nexus considering one was poisoned mid-match?”
Me:
HELLO since the start of december i’ve made… babies. these are hokusai (scaly bunny boy) and yayoi (fluffy turtle trans girl)!! they came outta eggs!
good to know doodling habits can be resuscitated with combi of otps ocs and trans hcs. i hope at least a few of you would look forward to seeing more of them and their wacky antics living in both modern NYC and feudal Japan!
them together <33
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