i wrote a poem. this is the first time i have posted anything like this so any and all feedback is appreciated, even if you don’t think it’s worth it i would love it. this is just straight from pen to paper in like 10 minutes so it won’t be a masterpiece, but if you see this please let me know what you think.
my mind’s gone mad.
did you notice?
gone by whispers
like soft smoke (tendrils).
my mind went mad.
I did not notice (did you?)
I mourn the normalcy
I never had.
my mind was mad.
for so long (clouded over)
did you notice?
my mind’s gone mad.
the clouds are gone
but my loss remains.
have you noticed?