Hello!!! Hopefully I won’t bother you but i loved the 501 x reader where they all are crushing on her!!! Do you think there’s the possibility that we could get a part two? I just want them all to be happy together -but a little angsty moments are great too! Thank you and i love your writing! Best clone scenario page on tumblrrr 🥰🥰🥰
Of course! A part 2 for this fic has been requested nearly 10 times.
I may need to turn this into a series. There will definitely be a part 3 at least 🫶
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501st x Reader
You were still reeling from the contact.
Rex’s hand, steady at your waist, had felt like it burned through your tunic. Not with heat, but with something more dangerous—something forbidden. And it had lingered just a second too long. Enough for you to realize he wanted to hold you there. Enough for him to realize that he couldn’t.
Now he wouldn’t meet your eyes. Not during the rest of the rotation. Not at the debrief. Not even in the mess later that night.
Hardcase had gone back to his usual boisterous self, none the wiser, but Kix glanced between you and Rex with the subtle awareness of someone too observant for his own good. You tried to brush it off. Smile. Pretend. But it was like breathing around broken glass.
Later that night, you found yourself staring up at the ceiling of your quarters, eyes wide open, body still.
And then the door chimed.
You sat up fast, heart racing. “Come in,” you called, voice steady despite the storm inside.
It was Rex.
He stepped in and the door hissed shut behind him. No armor—just blacks. He looked exhausted. And maybe something else. Haunted, almost.
“You shouldn’t be here,” you said quietly, more to yourself than to him.
“I know.”
Silence stretched between you. And then he finally looked at you.
“I didn’t mean to cross a line,” he said, voice low, gravelly. “Back in the training room.”
“You didn’t,” you lied.
Because the truth was worse. He didn’t cross it—you wanted him to. You still did.
He rubbed a hand over the back of his neck. “It’s not supposed to happen like this. You’re a Jedi. I’m… I’m a soldier.”
“You’re Rex.”
That made him pause.
You stood up, crossing the small space between you, pulse thundering.
He didn’t touch you. He didn’t move. But the way he looked at you—like you were the last light in the galaxy—that was enough to break you.
“We’re not allowed this,” he said, finally.
“I know.”
But you also both knew something else, something unspoken: if the war didn’t kill you, this would.
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You thought things might settle after that night with Rex. But they didn’t. If anything, the tension only thickened. Because it wasn’t just Rex watching you a little too long anymore.
It was Kix, catching your arm after a mission with fingers that lingered too long on your wrist as he checked for injuries.
“You push yourself too hard,” he murmured, voice low as his eyes searched yours. “Someday, you won’t come back. And I…” He trailed off before finishing, but the weight of what he didn’t say clung to the air between you.
It was Fives, who cracked jokes louder than usual when Rex entered the room, his laugh a little too sharp. When he caught you alone, he dropped the act.
“You know he’s not the only one who cares, right?” he said, eyes dark with something more serious than you were used to seeing in him. “He’s not the only one who notices.”
It was Jesse, who always sat beside you at the mess, quietly pushing your favorite ration pack your way without saying anything. You caught him watching you once, and when you met his gaze, he didn’t look away.
“You deserve better than this,” he said, voice tight. “Better than silence. Better than having to hide.”
Hardcase didn’t hide a damn thing. He wore his affection on his sleeve—laughing too loud, standing too close, finding excuses to spar. “You know I’d follow you anywhere, right?” he asked one evening, sweaty and bruised, grinning. “No questions asked.”
Tup was quieter, but it was there. In the way he always made sure you were covered. In the way he sat across from you during ship travel, stealing glances when he thought you weren’t looking. You caught him once, and he blushed so hard he looked like he might combust.
Then there was Dogma, who clung to rules like they were life rafts—but his devotion to you bent those rules every damn day. He flinched when others got too close. Spoke up when he thought someone pushed you too hard. And when you called him out on it, he just said, “You matter. More than they think.”
They were a unit. Brothers. But when it came to you, that unity was starting to fray.
You could feel it in the silences.
In the way they hesitated to speak freely when Rex was in the room. In the way Jesse squared off subtly when Fives stood too close. In the tension crackling in every quiet corridor.
You were the Jedi they shouldn’t have fallen for. The light they wanted to protect. But you were also one person—and they all knew that.
And maybe the worst part?
You didn’t know who you were falling for.
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The op on Vanqor should’ve been simple: recon the outpost, confirm Separatist movement, exfil. No drama. No losses.
But nothing was simple anymore.
You split the squad in two. Rex led one team, you led the other. Standard formation. Except the tension was anything but standard.
From the start, Fives was running his mouth.
“Oh, so Rex gets to babysit the high ground,” he said as he checked his rifle. “How convenient.”
“Because I’m the Captain,” Rex snapped without looking up. “And because someone needs to stay focused on the mission.”
“Focused?” Jesse muttered under his breath. “That’s rich coming from you.”
You glanced at them all sharply. “Cut the chatter.”
They did—sort of. Kix shot Jesse a look. Jesse shot Fives one back. Even Tup, usually calm, was twitchier than usual. And Dogma was walking like he was seconds away from snapping someone’s neck.
Still, the op moved forward.
You took Hardcase, Tup, and Jesse with you. Rex had the others. Two klicks into the canyon, comms lit up.
Rex: “General, got movement near the ridge. Confirmed clankers. Looks like a patrol.”
You: “Copy. Proceeding to secondary overlook.”
Then static. Followed by—
Fives: “We’ve got this, General. Don’t worry, I’ll keep him from throwing himself in front of a blaster for you.”
There was a sharp click before Rex cut him off: “Fives, stay off the channel unless it’s tactical.”
Back with your team, things weren’t much better.
Hardcase was bouncing on the balls of his feet. “Can’t believe I missed the team with the romantic tension. You should’ve seen Rex’s face, Tup—guy’s wound tighter than a wire.”
Jesse barked a laugh. “At least he’s not pretending he’s subtle. Unlike some.”
Tup sighed. “Please don’t start again.”
You stopped in your tracks, glaring at them. “You think this is a game? You want to bicker while droids are swarming a ridge less than a klick away?”
They fell silent, shame flickering in their eyes.
Then came the ambush.
Blasterfire erupted from the cliffs. Shouts, heat, chaos.
Rex’s voice came through the comm again—sharp, controlled. “Engaging hostiles. Kix is hit but stable.”
You snapped orders, leading your squad into flanking position, instincts taking over. You caught sight of Rex across the ridge, laying down cover, Fives behind him—but they were arguing even mid-fire.
“Cover me!” Rex shouted, moving up.
“Could’ve said please,” Fives muttered, though he did as told.
Jesse nearly got clipped trying to keep you shielded. “I said I’ve got you!” he snapped when you tried to redirect him.
After the skirmish, when the smoke cleared and the ridge was secure, the tension boiled over.
“Is this how it’s going to be now?” Rex growled, throwing his helmet down. “We can’t run a clean op because every one of you is too busy acting like kriffing teenagers.”
“Don’t pin this on us,” Jesse snapped. “You’re the one sneaking around with her after lights out.”
“Nothing happened,” Rex shot back.
Kix scoffed. “No, but something wants to.”
Tup looked between them, torn. “This isn’t what we’re supposed to be.”
And Dogma, silent until now, spoke with cold finality: “Feelings don’t belong on the battlefield. You’re all risking her life.”
The silence that followed was heavier than the blasterfire.
You stood there, heart pounding, breath caught somewhere between fury and grief.
This war was pulling you apart from the inside. Not from wounds or droids—but from love, jealousy, and every unspoken word between them.
The silence stretched long after Dogma’s words hit the ground like a blaster bolt.
You could see it—every line in their faces taut, wounded. The guilt. The fear. The ache.
And still, you stood tall.
Composed. Cold, maybe. But you had to be.
“I need every one of you to listen to me,” you said, voice even, sharp like a vibroblade. “And I need you to understand this the first time, because I will not say it again.”
No one spoke. Even Fives went still.
“I am a Jedi,” you continued. “And whether or not that means something to you anymore—it still means something to me. The Code forbids attachment. That isn’t a guideline. It isn’t a suggestion. It is a foundational truth of who I am and what I chose to be.”
Rex looked away. His jaw tightened.
“This war has blurred the lines between soldier and brother, between ally and… more. But that does not change the Code. It does not change the expectations I hold for myself.”
You took a breath, feeling the heat rise behind your ribs—but not letting it show.
“I am not your hope. I am not your escape. I am not something you can cling to in the middle of this chaos. I am your general. I will fight beside you. I will protect you. I care about you. But I will not—I cannot return these… feelings.”
Hardcase looked like you’d slapped him. Kix’s mouth parted, then closed again. Fives had nothing to say.
And then you said the thing none of them wanted to hear:
“If any of you truly respect me—if you truly believe in the Jedi you claim to admire—then let me go. Detach. Redirect whatever it is you feel into something that will not get one of us killed.”
Tup stepped forward, hesitant. “But you do care. We know you do.”
You didn’t deny it. You couldn’t. But you answered with the quiet, unmoving weight of Jedi truth.
“Yes,” you said. “But caring is not the same as holding on.”
Another pause.
“I’m not your way out,” you finished. “I’m the one leading you into the fire. Don’t follow me with your heart. Follow me with your discipline. Or don’t follow me at all.”
And with that, you turned—cloak sweeping, boots hitting durasteel with finality.
You didn’t look back.
Because if you did… you weren’t sure the Jedi in you would win.
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The moment she disappeared into the shadows of the canyon pass, the squad felt gutted. Not wounded—hollowed out.
The silence wasn’t peace. It was pressure. It built between them like a thermal detonator waiting for a trigger.
“She didn’t have to say it like that,” Hardcase muttered first, breaking the quiet. “She made it sound like we’re a liability.”
“She’s not wrong,” Dogma snapped, arms crossed tight over his chest. “We lost focus. We compromised the mission.”
Fives scoffed. “Oh, come off it, Dogma. You’re not exactly guilt-free just because you pout from a distance instead of making a move.”
“Don’t start,” Jesse growled. “We wouldn’t even be in this mess if you hadn’t made a scene during the damn firefight.”
“I wasn’t the one staring at her like a lovesick cadet while blaster bolts were flying!”
“You want to go?” Jesse stepped forward.
Kix shoved himself between them. “Enough. You’re all making this worse.”
“No,” Rex said sharply, his voice cutting through the air like a blade. “I’ll take it from here.”
Everyone turned. Rex’s helmet was still tucked under his arm, his face unreadable—controlled, cold, and deadly calm.
“She’s right,” he said, no hesitation. “Every word. We let our feelings get in the way. We made it personal. That’s not what we were bred for. That’s not what she needs.”
Fives shifted, jaw clenched. “So what—just pretend it doesn’t exist?”
Rex stepped closer, tone steely. “We have to. Because if we don’t, she dies. Or we do. Maybe all of us.”
Tup looked away. Jesse stared at the ground. Even Hardcase, for once, didn’t have a joke.
“You think I don’t feel it?” Rex said, quieter now. “You think I haven’t thought about what it would be like to give in? To tell her how I feel?”
He shook his head. “That’s not what love looks like. Love is discipline. Restraint. We follow her lead. We put her safety above what we want. That’s our job. That’s who we are.”
Nobody argued.
Because they all knew he was right.
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They all handled it differently.
Dogma pulled back first.
He barely spoke during prep. Stood at parade rest with surgical stillness. Didn’t sit with the squad, didn’t meet your eyes. He obeyed, to the letter—but colder now, like retreating behind a regulation shield.
Fives, on the other hand, spiraled.
He picked fights. With Kix, with Jesse, even with Rex. His banter turned sour, jokes laced with venom.
“She doesn’t mean it,” he muttered to Jesse in the hangar. “You don’t just fight beside someone for years and feel nothing. She’s trying to protect us. But that doesn’t mean we stop caring.”
Jesse didn’t answer.
Because Jesse was the one pushing harder.
He wasn’t loud about it—but you noticed. He stayed closer during patrols. Walked you to your quarters even when you didn’t ask. Spoke softer. Asked if you’d eaten. You knew the intent behind it. And it terrified you.
You needed clarity. Solitude.
But the moment you stepped outside the command tent to breathe—Tup was already waiting.
He didn’t say anything at first. Just offered you a ration bar with a small, tentative smile. Like he didn’t expect you to take it, but needed you to know he’d tried.
You sat beside him anyway.
“It’s a lot,” he said after a beat, voice low. “Too much, sometimes.”
You didn’t speak.
He didn’t push.
“I’m not gonna say they’re wrong to feel it,” he added, eyes on the dirt. “But I get why you had to say what you did. It hurts. But I get it.”
You turned your head slowly. “Do you?”
He met your eyes. Soft. Steady. “Yeah. Because when you love someone… really love them… you don’t ask them to break themselves just to make you feel better.”
That quiet truth stuck in your chest like a blade.
Tup didn’t reach for your hand. He didn’t move closer. He just stayed there, beside you, letting you breathe.
And for the first time in days… you felt like maybe someone saw you—not as something to win. But as someone to understand.
You didn’t want to fall apart.
But with Tup sitting next to you, not expecting anything—not even an answer—it was hard to keep everything held together.
The ration bar stayed in your hand, unopened. You stared at it like it held answers you didn’t have the strength to look for.
“You know,” Tup said gently, “you don’t have to be the strong one all the time.”
You gave him a dry look. “That’s rich, coming from a soldier bred to never break.”
He smiled faintly. “Yeah, well. We all crack different. Some of us just do it quieter.”
You laughed—soft and broken. “Is this you trying to cheer me up, Tup?”
“Maybe,” he said with a small shrug. “Maybe I just wanted to sit beside someone who makes the war feel a little less like war.”
You looked away. His words landed somewhere deep, somewhere dangerously tender.
There was a moment—just a moment—when you let your shoulders drop. When you leaned just barely toward him, not enough to cross a line, but enough to feel how close the edge really was.
And Tup’s voice, softer still: “You don’t have to be alone.”
Your breath caught. Eyes burning. Just a blink from letting it slip—just a few more seconds and you might have said something you couldn’t unsay.
But then—
“General?”
You turned sharply, straightening.
Kix.
He looked between the two of you. His gaze landed on Tup’s proximity, on your expression—cracked, vulnerable.
Too late.
“I—” He cleared his throat, eyes guarded now. “I was coming to check on you. Thought maybe you’d want to talk.”
Tup shifted, quietly rising to his feet. “She’s alright. Just needed some quiet.”
You could feel the tension coil between them—one of them arriving first, the other arriving just late enough to lose something that hadn’t even happened.
You stood too. “Thank you, Kix. I’m okay. Just tired.”
He gave a short nod, but the disappointment was unmistakable. He wasn’t angry. But he felt it.
And you knew that by tomorrow, the silence between some of them would stretch even deeper.
Because kindness had turned competitive. And comfort was starting to feel like a battlefield too.
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