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“But if you forget to reblog Madame Zeroni, you and your family will be cursed for always and eternity.”

The Untamed - No Children

I'm not usually one to post here, but I tried my hand at editing & you're all very welcome to watch me lose my mind about these dudes for 2.28 minutes

OP didn't allow reblogs but I just need to share this so I can agree!! Like Scott is my fav character bc he's so sweet and cares about EVERYONE and is so loyal and Stiles is the bloodthirsty one 😂 and he loves Scott so much like NUMBER ONE FAN

currently crying myself to sleep because of this book

just finished song of achilles and I am ugly crying. howwwww does this book destroy me like this

Scott is literally the good moral compass of the group of course he gave people seconds chances. But let’s remember Theo’s second chance was done by Liam and Scott allowed to save Stiles. Scott gave Derek a chance after like what the first 2 seasons. Which makes sense because in the first 2 seasons Derek was this asshole he didn’t know with murderous intentions. By season 3 Scott trust Derek as much as Derek allows (Derek with his secretive ways, I mean). And he did not treat Stiles like dirt, let’s be real (if anything it was the other way around but I love their friendship so I won’t even say that). Scott does whatever he can for stiles and vice versa. He never shamed stiles for anything at all, they had 1 misunderstanding the whole show and it was on both of them. Also please name a time he blamed someone for what was happening around him, (besides Derek and Peter in season 1)

babe wake up new hozier lyrics just dropped

tragedy enjoyers when even good intentions lead to ruin

to bite. Fondly.

Sorry I'm going to be more normal about him

how do you write a liar?

How to Write Liars Believably

Language

The motive of every goal is the make the lie seem plausible while taking blame off the speaker, so liars will often project what they say to a third party: "Katie said that..."

Referring to third parties as "they" rather than he or she

In the case of a deliberate lie prepped beforehand, there will be an overuse of specific names (rather than pronouns) as the speaker tries to get the details right.

Overuse of non-committal words like "something may have happened"

Masking or obscuring facts like "to the best of my knowledge" and “it is extremely unlikely," etc.

Avoiding answers to specific, pressing questions

Voice

There's isn't a set tone/speed/style of speaking, but your character's speech patten will differ from his normal one.

People tend to speak faster when they're nervous and are not used to lying.

Body Language

Covering their mouth

Constantly touching their nose

fidgeting, squirming or breaking eye contact

turning away, blinking faster, or clutching a comfort object like a cushion as they speak

nostril flaring, rapid shallow breathing or slow deep breaths, lip biting, contracting, sitting on your hands, or drumming your fingers. 

Highly-trained liars have mastered the art of compensation by freezing their bodies and looking at you straight in the eye.

Trained liars can also be experts in the art of looking relaxed. They sit back, put their feet up on the table and hands behind their head.

For deliberate lies, the character may even carefully control his body language, as though his is actually putting on a show

The Four Types of Liars

Deceitful: those who lie to others about facts

2. Delusional: those who lie to themselves about facts

3. Duplicitious: those who lie to others about their values

Lying about values can be even more corrosive to relationships than lying about facts. 

4. Demoralized: those who lie to themselves about their values

Additional Notes

Genuine smiles or laughs are hard to fake

Exaggerations of words (that would normally not be emphasized) or exaggerated body language

Many savvy detectives ask suspects to tell the story in reverse or non-linear fashion to expose a lie. They often ask unexpected, or seemingly irrelevant questions to throw suspects off track.