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writing smut depends on each person's writing style but i think there's something so gut-wrenchingly beautiful about smut when it's not very graphic and vivid. like., would this turn on a reader more?
"he kissed her, pulling her body closer to him."
or this?
"His lips felt so familiar it hurt her heart. His breathing had become more strained; his muscles tensed. She let herself sink into his embrace as his hands flattened against her spine. He drew her closer."
(Before proceeding further, these are all "in my opinion" what I think would make it better. Apply parts of the advice you like and neglect the aspects you do not agree with it. Once again I'm not saying you have to follow a certain type of style to write smut! Creative freedom exists for a reason!)
One may like either the top or the bottom one better, but it totally depends on your writing to make it work. Neither is bad, but the second example is more flattering, talking literally. (Here is me an year after writing this post, i think, either is amazing, depending on the context. the type of book you're writing, your writing style and preferences!)
express one's sensory feelings, and the readers will automatically know what's happening.
writing, "her walls clenched against him, her breath hitching with his every thrust" is better than writing, "she was about to cum".
(edit: once again, hi, it's me. Either is amazing depending on ur writing style. Everything at the end is about taste.)
here are some vocabulary you can introduce in your writing:
whimpered, whispered, breathed lightly, stuttered, groaned, grunted, yearned, whined, ached, clenched, coaxed, cried out, heaved, hissed
shivering, shuddering, curling up against one's body, squirming, squirting, touching, teasing, taunting, guiding, kneeling, begging, pining, pinching, grinding,
swallowing, panting, sucking in a sharp breath, thrusting, moving gently, gripped, biting, quivering,
nibbling, tugging, pressing, licking, flicking, sucking, panting, gritting, exhaling in short breaths,
wet kisses, brushing soft kisses across their body (yk where), licking, sucking, teasing, tracing, tickling, bucking hips, forcing one on their knees
holding hips, guiding the one on top, moving aimlessly, mindlessly, sounds they make turn insanely beautiful, sinful to listen to
some adverbs to use: desperately, hurriedly, knowingly, teasingly, tauntingly, aimlessly, shamelessly, breathlessly, passionately, delicately, hungrily
he sighed with pleasure
her skin flushed
he shuddered when her body moved against his
he planted kisses along her jawline
her lips turned red, messy, kissed and flushed.
his hands were on his hair, pulling him.
light touches traveled down his back
words were coiled at his throat, coming out as broken sobs, wanting more
he arched his back, his breath quivering
her legs parted, sinking into the other's body, encircling around their waist.
+ mention the position, how they're being moved around---are they face down, kneeling, or standing, or on top or on bottom--it's really helpful to give a clear picture.
+ use lustful talk, slow seduction, teasing touches, erratic breathing, give the readers all while also giving them nothing. make them yearn but DO NOT PROLONG IT.
sources to refer to for more:
gesture that gets me on my knees !!
(more to comeee, check out my hot or kisses prompts on my master list!)
Charlastor Week 2021:
Day 2: Protection!
I'M SORRY, BUT SOME OF THEM ARE SO FUNNY TO ME I CAN'T:'))
SHOULD I DRAW SOME OF THOSE?
HAMILTON 10TH ANNIVERSARY ART
The colors here was soooo fun to do bro also it was really cool to draw historical burr and ham hehe
๐ ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฑ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ ๐๐ผ๐บ๐ฒ ๐ผ๐น๐ฑ ๐๐ฒ๐ป๐ฑ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฟ๐ ๐ณ๐ฟ๐ผ๐บ ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ญ! ๐ ๐๐ต๐ถ๐ป๐ธ ๐ถ๐ ๐๐๐ฟ๐ป๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ผ๐๐ ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐น๐น๐ ๐ด๐ผ๐ผ๐ฑ.
๐๐ ๐๐ฟ๐ฎ๐ ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐น๐ผ๐.
thought it'd be fun if Adam gained snake-like attributes (mainly because he would hate it A LOT)
Charlastor Week 2021:
Day 4: Sick Day
"it's all in the eyes i was once told"
catching the stare of someone across a crowded room
subtle furrowing of eyebrows beyond a blank facade
coldness easing into warmth
a fond mothering gaze
corner of the lip nudged upward
forced glower/glare as they break underneath
batting their lashes, playful
a boisterous laugh
intrigue piercing the stoic
proud smugness at the other's success
lingering glances
a childish joy bursting through
pupils dilate
eyelids shut in a look of peace, calm and trust
"there was once a time when they were mine"
terseness
features fold into a scowl
an urgent flinching back
coldness returns (as though the warmth had never come)
lips part then purse
invasion of shock
slow stare at the floor
the ripple effect of a swallow
frustrated breath/sigh
bitter laugh in reminiscence
dread tearing through the seams of their composure
"darkness"
mean smirk- teeth bared grimace- scowl
dismissive gaze
gaze of contempt/impatience
threat lowering the voice
sardonic goading grins verging on manic
rolling one's eyes
flicker of irritation in the eyes
stares stubbornly ahead despite distraction
gritted teeth, clenched jaw
fierce biting remarks
even measured complexions betraying no thought
strangling oneself back from violence
utter apathy
murderous silence hanging in the stare
snobbish laughter
smiling at another's downfall
Taking anti-depressant pills?? Seeing a therapist??? Journaling???? No need babe, my fav writer just dropped another x reader fic.
thinking of cock at this difficult time ๐
Canโt believe Adam literally just did this meme
Hello, Welcome in Twenty year old Woman universe i write for fun but English isn't my First language. Fandoms that i like: Hazbin Hotel Helluva Boss Potc Countryhumans HTTYD Burlesque Mlp Batim and Batdr FNAF Cuphead (The game) Mario Brothers (game, movie) Jurassic Park/World Lion King (1994) Sleeping beauty (1959) Peter pan (1953/2003) Descendants Who framed Roger Rabbit Miraculous Villianous Gravity falls OUAT Total Drama Island, Action, World Tour, Revenge of the Island DC Batman animated series 1992 and its sequels Marvel Creppypasta Harry Potter Muppets Corpse Bride Nightmare Before Christmas Frankweenie Book of life Musicals: Hamilton Mean girls musical and movie Heathers musical and movie Repo genetic opera Beetlejuice musical Horrors: Nightmare on The Elm Street IT Childs Play Alien Scream Terrifier Shop of Little Horrors Psycho Lamb Silent Stephen King Books IT Shinning Pet Semetery Christine Crow Beetlejuice That's all but theres more but i can't remember
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