One Of My First Real Attempts At A Poem Outside Of School. I'm Intrigued To See What People Think It

One of my first real attempts at a poem outside of school. I'm intrigued to see what people think it is and what the general story of it is.

"You to me.

Was is meant to be.

Gone from me.

For all eternity.

Alone in the dark.

Trapped inside this mental ark.

With no end in sight.

I deserve no delight.

Around me bring nothing but blight.

My wings clipped, I can't take flight.

Never will I rest.

But I tried my best.

You with me.

It was supposed to be

For what I thought would be all eternity"

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---------------Basics---------------

Name: Ana

Aliases: The knight 

Birthday: 

Age: 34

Species: unknown (anfhromomorpgic rattlesnake)

Ethnicity: unknown

True-Gender: unknown (female)

Viewed-Gender: unknown (female)

Sexuality: straight 

Occupation: A knight 

---------------Description/Social---------------

Height: 6 ft

Weight: 198 lbs(without armor) 374 lbs (with armor) 

Blood type: A+

Scars: none 

Tattoos: a Chinese dragon on their right shoulder blade

Nationality: unknown

Eye color: blue

Hair color: none

General description: A tall knight with thick silver armor and a longsword with a red torn cape

←Social/others:

Family: Benet(father) adria(mother)

Friends: alex

Love Interest: none

Hobbies: playing puzzle games 

Habits: smoking 

Likes: tulips, swordsmanship, shining her armor

Dislikes: magic users(unless she gets to know them)

Hopes: none

Fears: losing her family

Persona: none

--------------Abilities/Weapons-------------

←Physical/others:

Strengths:

Has great physical strength

Excelent with the sword

-- [more can be added]

Weaknessess

- semi restrictive armor 

-- [more can be added]

Disabilities: none

Fighting styles: sword

Biological advantages: snake venom, agile, snakes smell and vision 

Skills: sword

←Abilities:

Name: sword throw

Power: throws her sword

Description: she can throw her sword up to distances if 50 meters accurately 

Drawbacks: she loses her sword 

←Weapons:

Name: ethal

Description: a long sword with more style and decal added to it 

Drawbacks: none

←Equipment:

Name: bag of holding 

Description: infinite storage 

←Special moves:

Name: Rage

Description: her adrenaline levels alike chasing her to move faster and more swiftly when angered and in turn allow her to attack faster 

--------------Lore---------------

Begin:

Ana grew up with her parents in the kingdom of Adia(ay-dee-uh)  she spent most of her time in the training room with the desire to train to eventually become a royal knight for the king. Unfortunately when she came of age she learned that women weren't eligible to become royal knights. Instead she could become a watch Guard and protect the front gates of the kingdom. However she wasn't having any of that, a few nights after this news, she packed her things and left, leaving behind a note for her parents telling them she would be pursuing an adventure to get better at what she does. Eventually she discovered a blacksmithing forge atop a mountain, this is where she had her armor and sword brought into existence. It is also where she met her best friend, Alex. Alex was the apprentice to the black smith that worked there. He was a red fox and had the passion of creating weapons and armor for people. Over the years Ana fought and fought, more and more. She eventually became known as "The knight", she never took off her armor, at least not in public, she practically slept in it. No one knew who she was, her name, her gender, her goals, her face, she just showed up at random places, beat up bad guys and left mysteriously. Only people who knew her true identity were Alex and her parents. Eventually she arrived back at the Adia kingdom, the king begging the knight to join his forces, only for her to turn him down immediately. She enjoyed the look of sadness as she left the kingdom again. Nowadays she works as a mercenary for hire all throughout the land.


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Ok so wait the whole friends to lovera thing has been around since the greeks? Gawd dam, imagine the fan fics back then?

Do you think there is a word for enimies to lovers?

Ok So Wait The Whole Friends To Lovera Thing Has Been Around Since The Greeks? Gawd Dam, Imagine The

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1 year ago

people who say sugar free soda tastes the same as regular soda are broken and need fixing


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4 weeks ago
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If necromancers did exist do you think that they would be actually really common in legal cases? Like that meme where they revive their victim as a witness. Like would they the lawyer or a seperate job within the legal system, and do you think that people.would make it illegal to be used in a legal case?


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1 year ago

UPDATE RAHCE LOVES ELI AND CONFESSED IT, A WRENCH HAS BEEN THROWN IN FRACTURED DALARS PLAN

I always love when you are making a continuous story with other people, each person making the story move forward, and then things unintentionally mix perfectly.

For example. I have this character named "Fractured Dalar", who owns the soul of a different character "Eli" (pronounced Ellie). F.dalar (fractured Dalar) is extremely manipulative and is trying to make Eli not trust her friends and close ones.

Eli has a crush on this character named Rache(not mine, let's say they belong to person 1).

Rache in canon, is not ready for a relationship. He needs to figure out his emotions and learn more before he's ready for one. "I'll be ready in a few decades" rache told Eli. And Eli. Was fine with this. She was ok with not being able to date him and is content with it.

However Introduce Nova(character owned by person 2) people out of the canon are saying they ship Nova and rache based on their little cute interactions.

This is where things line up perfectly.

If in canon rache and Nova actually get together, it would break Eli completely and F.dalar would use that to manipulate to crap out of Eli. Because if that happened, from Eli's POV, rache just lied to Eli.

"I'll be ready in a few decades"

*2 months later, starts dating someone he literally just met*

From Eli's POV rache just really doesn't want to be with her and wants to let her down easy with the "few decades".

And mind you, none of this is scripted. This happened naturally. It's perfect

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khaotic-entity - That one furry that likes writing Lore for no reason
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