Shot by an evil hamburger?
TOP 3 TRAITORS:
3. Brutus 2. Judas 1. Printers when you are in a hurry
I’m not a perfectionist, but finding a typo or a grammatical error in my own already-published fic is like stepping on a Lego honestly
Anyone else not like it when Gilbert is portrayed as a pervert? When he touched Elizabeta's chest he did it because he thought she was a girl and was doing it as a joke. And when he realized Eliza was actually a girl he freaked out and cried in a church, begging for forgiveness. I'd rather he was portrayed as an awkward virgin (by choice) who refuses to touch women in a dirty way, and also refuses to watch porn because he's "a son of God". He was raised in a holy catholic order, with strict rules to not indulge themselves in such vulgar activities. I doubt he would go against the rules and morality he was taught growing up. Gilbert could be stuck in a room full of very beautiful but naked women and all he would do is freak out, cover his eyes and hope they don't come near him. He only offered that crotch cloth to Elizabeta cause he thought she was a guy, and even then it was just as a joke and he didn't actually have any serious ill intent.