Carcharoth By Anato Finnstark

so the royal family has an 'angelic' background that enables them to live longer, like centuries. And for Aurelian's family to rule for six generations, that means a long time! are there other dynasties before them? or current dynasties?

absolutely! There are other dynasties that rule their own kingdoms besides the Caelum family. Some of them are even more dominant than the Caelum family in areas such as power/magic or other aspects.

I'm making a map for the game, and I can't wait to finish it and share it with you all. But since I'm not really a pro at this stuff, I'm watching some videos and reading tips to make sure it's accurate and easy to read. Gotta make sure it doesn't turn out to be a mess lol.

Chop Shop is strictly 18+ for language, themes, and potential explicit content. 

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WE ARE LIVE!!! Chop Shop has officially relaunched on Itch.io! Available to play on desktop, tablet and mobile.

Prologue - EP .02 are ready to play - the same as the previous demo - with a new word count of 120k. The choicescript demo will be taken down at the end of the month.

Thank you so much to those who have helped me during this transition period of development! It has been crazy frustrating but I am so much more in love with the game than ever. And thank you to everyone who has been patiently waiting - hope you enjoy all the new bits and bobs!!

PLAY THE NEW DEMO NOW!

AN: CS has had some significant rejigging and rewriting. You can read the authors notes under the cut.

chop shop now has it's own UI! woohoo! (totally did not kill me) this, of course, will come with teething problems and accessibility issues. i am welcome to constructive feedback!

there are a lot of new dialog boxes to explore, especially the dashboard, which includes the PC's profile, inventory, contacts and a glossary page. (the stat definitions page from the old choicescript demo has been scrapped, too much text that wasn't needed.)

chapters are now called episodes! not a huge change but i prefer the vibe yknow.

there have been some extensive rewrites - especially in ep .01, the bar scene got a lot more fleshing out - so i expect typos and grammar errors have slipped through. this doesn't bother me too much but i appreciate any one who spots them to send them in!

there is now an 'end game' scenario in ep. 01. i won't be providing a walkthrough as i think it's relatively obvious given the scenario but it does give you an achievement!

i've kept achievements like the old choicescript demo but it no longer rewards points. maybe i will think of something to reward the player with later down the line?? who knows

i don't want to explain ALL the new details as i really encourage people to go find all the new flavour text and other things etc!!

next -- if you have not noticed, i have added a bug report to the links list. all issues, bugs, and errors found in the public demo can now be reported via the new bug report form.

in terms of writing, i am now porting episode 3. i have had rewrite plans for this chapter for a while, so i imagine this port will take some time. i was in the middle of writing episode 4 when i decided to make the twine jump lmao, so it hasn't been touched for a LONG time, probably since march. i plan to jump straight back into writing when episode 3 is all done!

like before, ep 3 won't be released until ep 4 has a first draft and i'm happy with the shape and direction. so it will be some time before i am able to release new content. but - we ball!

thank you for reading this far and i hope you enjoy the new and improved demo! happy reading! - becky :^)

Hey there!

I just wanted to pop in with a quick writing update. I'm happy to report that everything's going smoothly, and I've already managed to write around 1k words today. I'm still going strong and my aim is to complete two more scenes.

I appreciate your support!

Done! I updated the prologue and also fixed small errors.

ready? because the entirety of chapter nine is finally up. it's been a hot minute, i know, but with the aftermath of crimson and a new enemy looming in the distance, you can now find out what happens next with the gang, caine and sebastian.

IN THIS CHAPTER.

explore new depths to Blane

understand A a little better and N even more

contextualize K and Rylan's relationship and see a side to them that you don't rarely experience

see things from sebastian's point of view

fight. just don't die.

STATS.

chapter nine total. 65.1k

word count (from part one). 420,550 (+53.2k)

LINKS.

game !!!

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as some of you already noticed, the laidback/intimidating and independent/collaborative stats have been overhauled from the game. don't be alarmed; it was a decision on my part. i've decided to get rid of them because i didn't feel like they added much to the story in terms of flavour text and also, doing this gives me space to focus on enhancing the other stats.

as always, i truly truly hope you enjoy. a smaller update will be coming in the following weeks with tweaks to the relationships stats (and any other bugs found in this chapter). if you find any, feel free to report them in my ask box or email them to me at evertides@gmail.com. all my love <;33

Soo I’m conflicted.

Please choose what you would think would be best ♡

*The king being a morally gray RO* 👀

LEZ GOOO!! Another red flag to add to my collection uwu

Looks cool, but what do you mean redemption? From what I can tell the Mc was betrayed by his king and comrades through no fault of his own. Do you mean redeeming the order or something like that?

You're right. The term "redemption" can refer to making up past mistakes or wrongdoing. But in the context of the story, the redemption the MC is after involves seeking justice(or other methods 👀) over the order and the betrayal they have experienced.

Maybe I could've worded it out better? What do you think? 🤔

Thank you for checking out my wip! <3

NSFW asks: What are the ROs preferences in bed? And what are their kinks?

hohoho… 🤭

Aurelian: he’s mostly a top and leaning towards being a dom, but he would bottom depending on his partner. ;)

Kinks:

Marking/claiming [giving and receiving], body worship, praise [mostly receiving], overstimulation [giving], biting [both]

Elara: bottom and leaning towards sub but depending on her partner can be a demanding dom.

Kinks:

Praise [mostly giving], on a desk(😳), comfort [both], biting [receiving], teasing [both]

Kazuo: a total top and dom.

Kinks:

Biting/scratching [both], scent, marking/claiming [giving], against a wall/tree(🫣), clingy/comfort [giving]

Aiden/Ava: verse and can be a dom but mostly leaning towards sub.

Kinks:

Bondage(hands but not roughly), biting [mostly giving], praise [receiving], marking/ownership [giving], overstimulation and edging [both]

SC: verse and a total dom.

Kinks:

Teasing [giving], dirty talk [giving], biting/scratching [both], marking/claiming [mostly giving], begging [from partner]

tehee…

Omg i Love this

I love you anon 😏