Rephrase/change The Structure.

to bite. Fondly.

‘im a girl’ ’im a boy’ okay well ive got boulders on my shoulders collarbones begin to crack there is very little left of me and it’s never coming back

she let me hit cause i support my public library

Is this anything

how do you write a liar?

How to Write Liars Believably

Language

The motive of every goal is the make the lie seem plausible while taking blame off the speaker, so liars will often project what they say to a third party: "Katie said that..."

Referring to third parties as "they" rather than he or she

In the case of a deliberate lie prepped beforehand, there will be an overuse of specific names (rather than pronouns) as the speaker tries to get the details right.

Overuse of non-committal words like "something may have happened"

Masking or obscuring facts like "to the best of my knowledge" and “it is extremely unlikely," etc.

Avoiding answers to specific, pressing questions

Voice

There's isn't a set tone/speed/style of speaking, but your character's speech patten will differ from his normal one.

People tend to speak faster when they're nervous and are not used to lying.

Body Language

Covering their mouth

Constantly touching their nose

fidgeting, squirming or breaking eye contact

turning away, blinking faster, or clutching a comfort object like a cushion as they speak

nostril flaring, rapid shallow breathing or slow deep breaths, lip biting, contracting, sitting on your hands, or drumming your fingers. 

Highly-trained liars have mastered the art of compensation by freezing their bodies and looking at you straight in the eye.

Trained liars can also be experts in the art of looking relaxed. They sit back, put their feet up on the table and hands behind their head.

For deliberate lies, the character may even carefully control his body language, as though his is actually putting on a show

The Four Types of Liars

Deceitful: those who lie to others about facts

2. Delusional: those who lie to themselves about facts

3. Duplicitious: those who lie to others about their values

Lying about values can be even more corrosive to relationships than lying about facts. 

4. Demoralized: those who lie to themselves about their values

Additional Notes

Genuine smiles or laughs are hard to fake

Exaggerations of words (that would normally not be emphasized) or exaggerated body language

Many savvy detectives ask suspects to tell the story in reverse or non-linear fashion to expose a lie. They often ask unexpected, or seemingly irrelevant questions to throw suspects off track. 

Sorry I'm going to be more normal about him

insp.

OP didn't allow reblogs but I just need to share this so I can agree!! Like Scott is my fav character bc he's so sweet and cares about EVERYONE and is so loyal and Stiles is the bloodthirsty one 😂 and he loves Scott so much like NUMBER ONE FAN

LITERALLY DID NOT REALIZE THE FISH DIED. LIKE IT DIDNT REGISTER.

he was gone for 3 days

the lady said he had been there yesterday

THE FISH DIED

also I AM obsessed with Marc coming back from that long exhausting mission and being like "oh God oh fuck I killed his fucking fish he doesn't have any other friends" and rushing to the pet store before passing out

Lan Xichen was confronted by the truth at the end of everything. He has to deal with the pain and guilt of that for forever especially the complicated feelings that would come from his relationship with jgy

Jin Ling’s progression was only normal. He’s now sect leader. Yeah he’s probably a little more traumatized than he was with how whole life being based on a bunch of lies but he still had people there for him. With some therapy (that he won’t get) he’d probably be okay later and be sect leader like he’s supposed to, just younger and more abrupt than he was supposed to.

Nie Huaisang will simply live the life was already living with a bunch habored chunk removed(replaced by a different kind of chunk). He’ll have the satisfaction of saying he did it, he avenged his brother but of course something will always be wrong. He will live the life he’s made for himself, he knew where he would end up let’s be real.

Wen Ning and Jiang Cheng however. That could be another longer post. It’s a toss up between both of them but it’s most likely Wen Ning because he’s literally a corpse.

But it’s definitely not Lan Xichen, I’m sorry