I LOV EHER SM FUCK
TINY NIGHTFINCH SPOTTED IN MY SCHOOL ART BOOK
Ooh, can I have some info on Ajcloud please?
Does she play a part in Starclan kicking Night right back to the curb?
yeah :D assuming you mean ashcloud lol
so she was Alpine's first medic when it formed, and was killed at the end of its civil war along with Ravenheart, allegedly by Night. StarClan has like a council which makes up its main authority. Ashcloud is on it as well as a few others (so when i refer to StarClan, a lot of the time im mostly referring to those guys as they're in charge).
Ash's ‘job’ mostly consists of things like the security along the barrier between starclan and the dark forest and handling security-like issues with the living clans (like stopping revolts/conspiracies/wars etc).
to avoid revealing anything too much, Ash obviously gets pretty mad when she fails at that and Night destroys everything. so yeah while StarClan’s later return is attributed more to Ravenheart (and that certainly didn’t help) Ash’s actions, which i wont explicitly say, are the ones that really cause Night’s whole thing to fall apart :] like the final straw kind of thing, which is why i said Night's response was more directed at Ash rather than StarClan as a whole here:
Shes everything. Hes just ken .
I haven’t written fic in a year+ scripting this story is killing me 😔
really tempted to get rid of the other two clans and just have alpine because ive never felt motivated to expand on the other two.. unfortunately i think i need to keep snowdrift but evergreen is probably gonna go
I think people misunderstand "x fell first, y fell harder " trope because it's not about like the one who fell harder loves the other person harder. It's just that the one who fell first falls in a graceful way, one step at the time, maybe gradually over a span of time. The one who fell harder smashes trough the air, there's blood everywhere, everything is fine-
writing fanfiction is hell why do people do it. how are people writing over 2-3k words. on the regular. how.
#5 and/or #26 for the wip ask game? :3
woah i ended up rambling
5. What are the main themes?
I would say the main big one would be good+evil/moral ambiguity? I really like looking at morality in stories.. because of this reason I could name very few genuinely 'bad' cats in this story lol
plus whatever theme goes with some sort of corrupt system :] I love those (fictionally) :]
smaller themes like power, death, war, hate/love etc and these are all looked at specifically in context/influence of their little corrupt cat society
26. What do you still need to plan?
a whole bunch of stuff! there's many little plot issues that annoy me that I'd love to fix, the main two big things however are Rainpaw's character arc and the entirety of Part 3. um lots of text under the cut
Rainpaw's my main protagonist, he gets pov throughout all 3 parts but. idk what he's really doing. its hard to get him to the end point of his story because I'm not really sure what would change his mindset to get there? His ultimate job is to restore StarClan after like a year of anarchy (a plot problem in itself because I don't want to portray the downfall of a corrupt government-ish figure as bad lol that's a good thing) but he starts SL totally anti-StarClan in comparison to his Clan. Right now I'm kind of passing it off as the inter-faction conflicts he faces after StarClan's fall make him want to restore the Clans as they were supposed to be when they were formed, but I also don't want anarchy (? for lack of a better word I guess) = chaos because that's boring and kinda shallow in my opinion
WHICH LEADS INTO part 3 because I have the end of it etched into my soul but the rest of it is just everyone. existing. totally unplanned I have no idea what will drive the plot of part 3 yet. I want to explore the conflicts between the different factions that are created after the Clans fall apart so that may drive the plot for Petalclaw and Rainpaw/storm but as for Night? I need to plan what she's doing because her one goal is to destroy StarClan. Once she's done that (end of part 2), idk what will lead her to everything I have planned out for her at the end of part 3, which is again her vs starclan :/ it's like when Night is there but StarClan is not there is nothing driving her actions so I need to figure that out...
WOAH SORRY FOR ALL THAT BUT IT WAS FUN. sorry if it makes no sense... it distracted me from the worst history assignment of all time from hell itself so thank you for the ask! :D
I love symbolism about my characters nobody else understands