You're right, cap, you're right
look man i'm as ace as they come but pretty girls still make me nervous
This is the magic lucky word count. Reblog for creativity juice. It might even work, who knows.
**Update For the people asking I asked her and she bought the frog tea set HERE πΈ
I've reached page 143, so the time to vote is nigh: once I reach 150, do you guys want
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GIVE ME THE FORECAST β‘β‘
(a realization about dialogue formatting, from a comic artist turned novelist.)
One of the first things a novice writer learns about speech tags is that theyβre part of the βscaffoldingβ of prose. They should be largely invisible to the reader: use them when necessary, omit them when not, and be sparing in the application of verbs other than βsaidβ. They serve only the function of clarifying who is speaking when it is necessary to do so.
Except:
Sometimes you might want to use a speech tag in spite of the redundancy. The fact that the readerβs eyes slide right over them is an exploitable property. By slicing a line of dialogue in half with a speech tag, you can force the reader to perceive a meaningful pause between two utterancesβand the effect is much stronger than you might get out of an ellipsis or an em dash. Developing an intuition for when and how to do this is a huge part of learning to write dialogue, I think.
(And yes: if you ever wondered, this is exactly same the reason why comic artists sometimes βdouble bubbleβ their speech bubbles. Same end, different means!)
Alright, attempt #2:
We got a three-way tie last time, so I'm hoping this one is gonna gain a bit more traction! So, for the second time: who do you all want to see first?
@deadandgaysetanta @queen-of-hobgobblers @redkarmakai
Send this to all your favorite moots and pass the pumpkin round! KEEP THE PUMPKIN TRAIN GOING ππ€ππ€π
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Anywho, PUN'KIN TRAIIINNNNNππππππππππππππππ
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