Here are some vector versions of the logos I have chosen to work with and some possible colours to use as well. I plan to choose one of these and work on it further, I’m sure I’ll have a better idea of what I can do with these options after some feedback from my peers.
Activity One turned out to be a more fun challenge than I initially thought. I picked up a package that had a hole cut into it and when I unfolded it, I actually found that there were two holes! I was dreading trying to cut it. However, I decided not to worry about it too much and just enjoy the process.
I started out by tracing the package twice on tracing paper. I found I had to be careful with the tracing paper because it crinkled up easily when I used my eraser. I had trouble with tracing the entire package without it moving because it was too long for my hands. Eventually, I realized that if I folded it halfway, it was doable.
After taking the measurements and making note of all the writing on the little package, I finally decided to draw it out with my ruler using the measurements that I had taken.
Before cutting it, I carefully used my bone tool to create folds in the package. It was actually really good to struggle with getting the same effect in class with a pen lid, only to do it so easy with the actual tool at home. Even so, my tool got a bit ruined by my ruler because it was only hard plastic so I’d like to find a better material to use in the future.
I decided to opt out for drawing the fold marks, going off the measurements and bone fold lines instead. The hardest part was definitely trying to cut holes into the package and unfortunately, I didn’t do the best job at it. I need to figure out better tricks for cutting holes in the future.
This time, I tried cutting a pie into the holes, hoping that I could cut them out section by section. This just resulted in a choppy cut.
Still, it was a joyful experience to fold my little package up and understand just why each flap had to be different, and understand how it fit together.
While I wasn’t entirely happy with the recreation, I was satisfied with the way it folded together and when I pushed the flaps together correctly, I knew some glue would keep the holes lined up. I decided to leave it unglued for further work in class as it held together perfectly otherwise.
Reflection: Working with something tactile for the first time in a while was a joyful and happy experience. It reminded me what I love about graphic design, the simple happiness of making something that works. I need practice cutting holes too and I guess I’m going to need a steady supply of fresh blades in order to get through this semester and my fresh pad of bristol paper.
Brand Statement
Hi, my name is Sara. I am a graphic design graduate. When I’m not designing, I’m running my small enamel pin business or slinging coffee at White rabbit Coffee Co. No matter what the task, I put my all into it with gusto. I work bright and fast. I want to create real, positive change through my work, no matter how small.
Brand Promise
I’ll always do better than before. (WIP)
Pushing the limits on every project. (possibility?)
Today we got started on redesigning a package of our choice. It’s a project I was kind of looking forward to since I first saw my friends working on it two years ago!
I had two packages I wanted to work on at the start of conceptualizing. One of them was an easy choice, an over packaged, instant matcha tea satchet, four box extra, plastic wrapped disaster.
The other, was a beautiful knife pushed inside a plastic cage.
Though I knew which one would be easiest for me, something about the knife called to me. I started to paint pictures in my head of what my package could be and I knew, in the end, that was the one that I wanted to do.
I have started ideating and drawing thumbs but I think I know what I’m heading towards. I want my audience to really enjoy their experience of opening the package to reveal their tool, in the same excited way that a graphic designer might unwrap their gorgeous apple packaging to reveal a macbook.
To a culinary student or worker, a pairing knife is the ultimate tool, like the macbook is to the graphic designer. Both are equally important, both give the same delight and ease of use.
When I think about Design Thinking, I mainly just think about a circle. A circle represents fullness, infinite and the feeling of being complete. It also has no actual beginning or end, much like the design thinking process. Sure, you start with a problem and you end with a solution to the problem (hopefully) but your path to get there isn’t always linear and can involve a lot of back and forth. Or, you get there in one full turn. Either way, each step of the process is connected. Whether you choose to believe in design thinking or not, you most likely have a loose concept of it that you follow anyway.
Project 2 Creative Brief: Granola Package Design for Good Life Juice
Objectives
My goal is to create a sustainable series of packages for Good Life Juice’s new Granola line that stays true to the brand while being economically responsible for the producer (production costs and impact) and the environment. It should reflect Good Life Juice’s brand while being design smart. By that I mean that the design should be lasting and not follow trends, it should be something that my client can use for many years. I want to make something that will appeal to both men and women because my client said that 80% of her current clientele is female. Interestingly, 75% of her workforce is also female and that is something I want to showcase with the packaging as well.
The goal isn’t to scare men away from it though. So we’re looking for something more in the middle. My client also specified that she would like the packaging to be ‘classy, beautiful and femme’.
I already know that I want to make something super environmentally friendly that will match the way Good Life presents itself and strives to be. I found a Canadian Website that prints on seed paper and that’s a route I would really like to go down.
I also want to focus on the life cycle of the granola and the juice pulp involved in it. From start to finish, this granola is environmentally involved and I think this story is important. My client also mentioned that if my package contains plastic, she would like instructions for the user on how to recycle the plastic so that it is eco-responsible as a package and I think that’s really something I’d like to include if I go that route.
Audience
My client is expecting a wider range audience than she usually gets for her juices so I’m going to say that my audience ranges from the late twenties to people in their mid-sixties who are focused on their health and do not mind spending a little bit more on their granola! I have my parents as the perfect test audience as they are both on a health kick right now and have started to take an interest in good design because of my field of study.
In my head, I have three basic users I want to design for. Here is a quick set of notes on each:
Karen Whitmarsh - 28
Interests include maintaining mental and physical health through juice cleanses, yoga and daily exercise. She shops at Whole Foods because she likes buying locally and organic. She’s on the market for a new granola and already drink Good Life Juice. She’s considered GLJ’s granola before but has yet to buy it because the package underwhelms her in comparison to some of the other more sustainable packaging found at Whole Foods.
Jordan Bickeridge - 35
Jordan spent most of his twenties binge drinking at parties, smoking cigarettes and not really worrying about his health and now regrets it. He is brand new to the world of health foods and just wants to buy a granola that will be healthy for him and is worth his money. He wants to go into the granola/cereal aisle at Whole Foods and just grab a package probably based on what it says.
Elia Yang - 62
Elia has been eating raw and organic for the last five years and has finally gotten her wife on board with her. The two of them love drinking smoothies in the morning and are now looking for a filling snack that also satisfies their sweet tooth. They read online that granola was a great thing to just toss in their purse. Both of them love pretty packaging but hate waste and will likely buy packaging that appeals to them environmentally as well as aesthetically.
As you can see, this is a pretty wide range but that was the vibe I got from our client meeting today. I think it will be a fun challenge to meet these audience expectations.
Desired Response
I feel happy buying this granola because I know that it is eco-friendly and has the ingredients I want from it to make me feel healthy and whole.
Creative Considerations
This is NOT Mom n’ Pop’s granola. The packaging must be beautiful, high-end and gorgeous.
My client wants to be transparent with her customers, she hates it when packages say things like ‘all-natural’ and hates pushy packages.
HAS TO BE CLASSY.
No trends, no geometry, chevrons or primary colours as per my client’s taste.
Must be careful of food packaging regulations to Canada standards.
The packaging must have the essence of the Good Life Juice brand.
I can’t go overboard with materials, it needs to be affordable for my client.
The package should be sustainable but not look ‘hokey’.
So step one was to make some rough shapes on my ipad and then bring them into illustrator to make them into vectors. I tried to keep the style similar to the circle so that they would all match well and ended up with this:
Alright, not bad. You’ve got a square to promote balance, structure and in a more abstract sense, community and integrity. The circle represents wholeness, infinity, oneness. The triangle is known to be the strongest shape to build with as any weight placed on them is evenly distributed amongst the sides. Triangles also represent harmony.
Placing them in a line like this makes them look a little like building blocks, or children’s toys. The idea is that you can build Place into a space you need it to be.
Rough: verb.work or shape (something) in a rough, preliminary fashion."flat surfaces of wood are roughed down"
That’s a cool meaning and it applies well to Place because it’s supposed to be a space that you can make your own during use.
Just to be sure, I also tried out smoothing out the shapes so that I could see whether a rough shape or a smooth shape would be better.
At this point, I’m still undecided. I feel like rough and smooth have very different meenings to me. I like the way the rough one looks because it feels more organic and handmade, which is the type of community I’m trying to promote and reach with place. I want Place to be like a community hub and don’t want it to come across too polished.
On the other hand, I want Place to still appeal to higher-end events as well, despite the playful atmosphere of the logo shapes. In that sense, I think the smoother shapes could do better. I also know that the smoother shape would shrink down easier, and probably be easier to work within the long run. That being said, I don’t think it’s necessary to choose one or the other. There may be opportunities to use both styles depending on the event.
What is the name of your company? Place
What is your business/what do you do? Place provides a single location for a range of events in Nanaimo’s downtown core. It can be a pop-up market, a venue for a reception, an intimate concert, a wedding, a dance, an art class, the possibilities are endless.
How old is your company? The company has yet to exist.
What is the size of your company? A small core of people involved in bettering downtown Nanaimo. two people leading a small team of 5-6.
Are there specific dates the project needs to be completed? No.
Your budget dictates how much time can be spent on your project. What is the budget? Open
Describe your business in one sentence. No matter what event you are hosting, this is the place for it.
Describe your business in two words? Convenient, Reliable
Describe your business in one word? Perfect
What doesn’t your business do, or do well? Does not host large concerts, or sporting events.
What differentiates your business from competitors? Ease of access, Place’s main interest isn’t how much money can be made but in creating a place for the community to use without burning a hole in people’s wallets.
Is there a story that is unique to your company? When searching for a location for a grad show, Sara realized that there really wasn't’ anywhere in the downtown core that was appropriately sized or available for a small reception.
Or perhaps a unique story to the company name? Every city should have a place, somewhere that you can go that would be good for a range of events, but also a safe please for youth to hang out and host community events.
What are your business objectives? To create a beautiful place to host events that can host a range of things from shows, events, receptions, to tourist attractions in the summer months like a large market or informational sessions.
What do you want the design/redesign to do for your company? I want it to give the company a modern look and feel that is also welcoming to the community.
If you company/brand was a person who would it be? Why? I don’t know if it would be a person so much as a representation or even an animal. Place should be able to represent Nanaimo and the future of Nanaimo and its community. If anything, I’d say that I’d want it to be represented by the Orca because of its sense of community and ties to the Salish sea.
Is there an important object, building or person for your business? The building for this business is what makes the business and it would be located right downtown, on the water.
How do you want the public to perceive your image? A meeting hall, a place that represents Nanaimo, a sense of place for Nanaimo. It should feel like home but also fresh.
What do you want to be famous for? Being the place that people go to when they need a place.
What words should the general public associate your business with? Name at least 3. Modern, Inviting, Perfect
How do you want your image to be seen in 2 years? 10 years? Comfortable, familiar, renowned
Who are your competitors? Vancouver Island Conference Center, Port Theatre
How are they better/worse than your product/service? Vancouver Island Conference Center has a larger space to host larger events, Port theatre has better space for theatrical events.
Who might you compete with in the future? More developments.
Who is your customer? Describe in detail. My customer is anyone who is looking to use a space but is having trouble finding a good venue for it. A lot of people in Nanaimo have to settle for a venue that isn’t necessarily ideal and we are lacking a community spot.
What do they do? Live in Nanaimo and actively work towards bettering the downtown community via productions or events.
What do they watch? Community productions, local musicians, short plays, open mics.
Who is the ideal customer? Someone who perhaps wants to bring more culture to the city but lacks the funding/space.
How old is your ideal customer? 20-60
How do they find out about you? Through advertisements downtown, facebook, Nanaimo’s website
What do they want from you? A place to host an event.
What customers do you not want to attract? People who want to host an extremely large event or have the money to do so elsewhere. (Large corporate events that exceed capacity)
What do you offer your customers that your competition does not? A place that can be molded easily to fit their needs. The place isn’t designed a certain way to format one specific thing so it means its a space that can be used for a variety of things without many spacial issues.
Do you have an identity? No
What are two identities or logos that you like? Dislike? I like the CBC logo and the CNR logo. I don’t like the Nanaimo Chamber logo
What colours do you like? Dislike? I like sunset colours and when you just use multiple shades. I don’t like intense greens or dull colours.
What did we not ask that you want us to understand? The Place isn’t like anything that’s already in Nanaimo because it isn’t held back by a small size or a regular business, it isn’t meant to make money from events, just enough to cover expenses. It’s meant to be somewhere rentable that people can use to host a variety of events and promote community within Nanaimo.
Today was the end of activity two!
Although I’m not 100% happy with my outcome, I’m proud of the work I’ve done. I learned a lot about packaging through this activity. The biggest thing was having the proper measurements to work with and having the original package and mock-up made by my partner to show me what was important.
Every little thing about a package has to be considered. For example, my package had little cut-outs on the bottom flap, and a cut-out on the top flap to make it easier to open. Two of my folded in flaps were also shorter than the other two by a mere millimetre! It was cool to understand this and figure out the best way to adjust for this.
My takeaway from this project is that it’s important to look at the small stuff and to sweat it when it comes to designing a package!