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how can i make my characters empathetic?
Hey there, anon! Empathy is the ability to understand and share the feelings of others. I have two different ways to answer this: how to make your characters be empathetic and how to make people empathetic towards your characters.
This one is pretty self-spoken for. There is really only one way that I know of to make a character to be empathetic and it’s to put them in a situation that the character feels sympathy for another or have them care about something and to, eventually, share the feelings of the other character.
This could be just about anything - get creative with it! For example, have someone be treated unjustly, someone be thrust into grief or danger, facing an inner struggle, etc.
This is actually pretty easy and you can also just repeat the above tips and tricks if you’d like!
However, different examples - and remember to get creative with it - are having your character display a valuable trait (though this is typically more rewarding if done a little before they make a choice that has a negative impact).
In addition, people love to watch real talent. Have your character be particularly good at something but don’t just tell how good someone is with a knife; show us. Show us how long it took, how many hours of pain and getting injured they had to withstand. Show them caring for their knives as if they were children. Show not tell is a very important part here.
Have them wish for a universal change or show them caring for people. For example, wishing for world hunger to go away and helping starving people go hand in hand together. Wishing for equality and going to rallies for pride, black lives matter, etc, go hand in hand.
Give them something unique about them. Something that will make the reader grow some sort of attachment to them.
I hope this helped, anon, and if you have any additional questions, please come ask! Happy writings! x
- Mod Lilly
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My dog Katie recently got into a bottle of calcium, potassium and vitamin D3 pills. Worried, I rushed her to the vet’s office. They induced vomiting, gave her activated charcoal and a referral to a 24/7-pet hospital–For which they charged me close to $300.
When we arrived at the hospital, the new vet told us about the hotline. It costs $49, but they keep files on all sorts of breeds and incidences of poisoning–the vet told us that the hotline’s advice is gospel. Also, it costs more money if the vet places the phone call, so you should do this on your own.
Luckily, my dog just needed a lot of fluids and the charcoal seemed to absorb most of the nasty stuff, but I could have saved a lot of money by A) calling the hotline in the first place, and B) keeping activated charcoal with my pet supplies.
Most students don’t have a lot of cash to spend on food, but that doesn’t mean you have to go hungry. With the right recipes and some kitchen savvy, you can eat great even on a student’s budget. Here we’ll share 100 tasty recipes that you can make on the cheap. Along with saving money on meals, budget-savvy students can also save big on a college education by attending inexpensive online colleges.
Get a good start to your day with these cheap-o breakfasts.
Hash browns: Hash browns are cheap and easy to make, and cheaper than a trip to IHOP.
Puff pastry chicken and bacon: You can make bacon and chicken in puff pastry using this recipe.
Microwave scrambled eggs: Make scrambled eggs in the microwave with this recipe.
Breakfast burritos: You can make these burritos ahead for a quick microwave breakfast.
Onion quiche: This quiche makes a delicious, incredibly cheap breakfast.
Omelet in a bag: Boil eggs and some handy ingredients for this simple, cheap omelet.
Frittata: Add eggs to cheese, vegetables, and herbs you have handy in your fridge to make a frittata.
A college staple gets dressed up in these recipes.
Antipasto ramen salad: With ramen, pepperoni, black olives, onion, and Italian dressing, you’ll find yourself with a great ramen salad.
Beef & Broccoli Stir Fry Ramen: This dish makes a delicious stir fry from ramen.
Chinese style ramen with veggies: Make your ramen a little bit healthier with some vegetables added in.
Ramen noodle alfredo: Turn your ramen noodles Italian with this recipe.
Beef & Broccoli Ramen: Add some meat and veggies to your ramen to make this dish.
Spring ramen salad: Take a fresh approach to ramen with recipe.
Hamburger ramen: Ground beef with ramen makes for a great meal.
Chicken hollandaise ramen: Add chicken and hollandaise to your ramen for this meal.
Egg drop noodle soup: You’ll combine ramen, eggs, and flour to make this tasty soup.
Lo mein ramen: Follow this recipe for ramen lo mein style.
Creamy veggies and ramen: Add celery soup and vegetables to ramen, and you’ll have a great meal.
Pasta ramen salad: Use ramen as the base to make this delicious pasta salad.
Use these recipes to step up your sandwiches.
Hot Dog Egg Sandwich: Get a good portion of protein and flavor from this sandwich.
Egg Salad Sandwich: Cook up some hard boiled eggs for a cheap, tasty sandwich that’s really versatile.
Monte Cristo Sandwich: This sandwich is a delicious hybrid of grilled ham, cheese, and french toast.
Grilled chicken and apple sandwich: This hot sandwich is healthy, affordable, and delicious.
Canned salmon sandwich: Add celery, horseradish, and swiss cheese for a delicious, healthy meal from a can.
Turkey, chutney and avocado grilled sandwich: This sandwich is an exotic, cheap treat.
Grilled Cheese Sandwich: The classic college staple, grilled cheese sandwiches pack a lot of flavor for very little cost.
These simple recipes can be pulled off in one pot.
Creamy cauliflower soup: This vegetable soup is cheap, easy, and surprisingly tasty.
Cheap chili: Use chopped beef, tomatoes, and more for this cheap chili.
Butternut Squash Soup: Take advantage of cheap winter vegetables with this soup.
Slow cooker BBQ chicken: Combine cut up chicken with your favorite barbeque sauce for this recipe.
Crockpot lemon chicken: Get inexpensive cuts of chicken and make this lemony meal for lots of flavor without lots of money.
Minestrone soup: Eat this classic soup for a healthy, cheap meal.
Cheeseburger soup: This soup is hearty enough to be a meal.
Slightly Italian crockpot chicken recipe: With chicken, artichoke, onions, and spices, you’ll get an Italian chicken meal in a slow cooker.
Cranberry pot roast: Beef roast and cranberries offer a lot of flavor in this crockpot meal.
Crockpot potato soup: Make this soup from chicken broth and potatoes.
Corn, Bacon, and Potato Chowder: This hearty chowder is great for winter eating.
Chilled avocado soup: Check out this recipe for a healthy, refreshing treat.
Slow cooker pulled pork: Make pork shoulder in the crock pot using this recipe.
Middle East Chicken Soup: This ethnic chicken soup is a cheap, tasty, treat.
Bean soup: In this bean soup recipe, you’ll find lots of protein for just a little money.
Use these healthy recipes to make cheap, delicious salads.
Caesar salad: Combine romaine lettuce, parmesan cheese, croutons, and dressing for a classic salad.
Simple spinach salad: In this tasty salad you’ll find sweet pears and spinach.
Bowtie Pasta Salad: Throw together some pasta, tomatoes, and other vegetables for this salad.
Cucumber salad: This salad is fresh, delicious, and cheap.
Caprese salad: This caprese salad is simple and delicious.
Chicken Caesar salad: Eat this recipe as a salad, or put it into a wrap for a healthy, cheap treat.
Simple green salad: Here you’ll find a simple, inexpensive salad with great flavor.
Pecan mandarin orange salad: Get a bright and sweet salad from this recipe.
Cucumber salad with sour cream: This salad is cheap and refreshing.
Salmon orzo salad: With salmon filets, or even canned salmon, you can put together this salad treat.
You’ll find delicious casseroles in these recipes.
O’Brien Casserole: Use O’Brien potatoes, beans, lean meat, and some veggies for a great potato casserole.
Baked Tuna Chow Mein Microwave Casserole: Pop this tuna casserole in the microwave for a quick meal.
Easy cheap casserole: This casserole combines easy, affordable ingredients.
Penne Pasta Casserole: Make this tasty pasta casserole for $3 or less.
Meatloaf: ground beef combined with ketchup, onions, and more makes a great meal for less than a dollar per serving.
Four Bean Casserole: This casserole is popular at potlucks and with barbequed meals.
Tuna casserole: With canned tuna, you can make a healthy, delicious tuna casserole on the cheap.
Get your grains with these recipes.
Microwave Mexican pizza: Use tortillas, cheese, salsa, and sour cream for this pizza.
Bagel pizza: Use this recipe to make pizza on a bagel.
Spaghetti: Pick up multigrain pasta with tomato sauce and mushroom for a big meal without a big budget.
Feast of Pasta: Create this casserole with pasta, onions, and other simple ingredients.
Shrimp with ricotta sauce on pasta: Upgrade your pasta dish with this recipe.
Easy calzones: Use cheese, vegetables, and pepperoni in these easy calzones.
Olio e Aglio Pasta: This side dish combines angel hair with oil and garlic.
Pasta salad: Combine your favorite pasta with salad dressing, and olives, vegetables, or herbs you have handy.
Pasta and Ricotta Cheese: This pasta favorite is a crowd pleaser.
These recipes offer affordable main dishes.
Baked potato: Often served as sides, a baked potato can be the main dish-just add lean meat, beans, or chili.
Mexican hot dogs: This twist on hot dogs is extra delicious.
Chili: With beef, tomatoes, and beans, you can make a delicious chili.
Tuna patties: Put tuna, egg, relish, crumbs, salad dressing, and other simple ingredients together to create yummy tuna patties.
Cheap beef stroganoff: This recipe offers a cheap version of beef stroganoff.
Vegetarian chili: Use soy protein, tomatoes, and beans for a protein and fiber packed chili without any meat.
Eggplant parmesan: Eggplant parmesan makes a cheap and delicious vegetarian meal.
Vegetarian sweet and sour tofu: If you’re looking for a great vegetarian meal on the cheap, check out this recipe.
Parmesan chicken: With breadcrumbs, parmesan, and chicken, you can make this very tasty main dish.
BBQ chicken: Slather chicken with barbeque sauce, pop it in the oven, and enjoy.
Lemon Herb Roasted Chicken: Make some delicious chicken in a slow cooker with this recipe.
Salmon patties: Use canned salmon, bread crumbs, and other simple ingredients for this healthy, cheap dish.
Meatballs and orzo: Make these easy meatballs instead of using store bought frozen ones.
Use these recipes to complement your entrees on the cheap.
Buttered baby carrots: Sweet, tender carrots make up this side dish.
Roasted asparagus: Follow this simple recipe for a healthy, cheap vegetable side.
Spicy mac: Make macaroni and cheese with Taco Bell hot sauce.
Garlic toast: Use this recipe for delicious garlic bread that will please any taste.
Microwave macaroni and cheese: Make your own homemade mac and cheese in the microwave.
Pesto stuffed cherry tomatoes: Pesto, ricotta, and tomatoes come together for this delicious side that’s great for potlucks.
Scalloped potatoes: These scalloped potatoes are easy and creamy.
Bean and rice salad: This salad is delicious and cheap.
Green beans amandine: With this recipe, you can omit almonds for even more money savings.
Onion scones: In these simple scones, you’ll find lots of flavor.
Potato croquettes: These croquettes are a great way to use your leftover mashed potatoes.
Twice-baked potatoes (microwave): Make this cheap potato classic in the microwave for easy cooking.
Broccoli and cauliflower salad: This salad is cheap and packed full of nutrients.
Satisfy your sweet tooth with these affordable dessert recipes.
Chocolate chip cookies: Create cookies with chocolate chips, M&Ms, nuts, or even pretzels with this recipe.
1 step brownies: Turn a chocolate box cake into simple, cheap brownies using this recipe.
Balsamic strawberries with marscapone cheese: A few delicious ingredients make for a tasty, cheap treat.
Cheap and quick cookies: This recipe will show you how to turn cake into cookies.
Lemonade pie: Simple ingredients go into this delicious, cheap pie.
Easy baked apples: Apples, brown sugar, cinnamon, butter, and raisins come together in this microwave recipe.
Super easy microwave peanut butter fudge: Only two simple ingredients to into this peanut butter fudge.
Checklist for character development.
Created by myself, compiled from questions gleaned from several sources, and some of my own additions.
It should be noted, that not every character will check every one of these things off. It is not REQUIRED to have all this information, but this checklist is, rather, a guideline for helping you think of your character as an entire, three dimentional being with thoughts, feelings, possessions, contradictions and background.
A character is 20% revealed to the reader, 80% writer/author/Mun knowledge. What the Reader sees is just the tip of the iceburg, but without the other 80% the character can’t help but come off feeling shallow. There’s nothing beneath the surface - KNOWING as much bout your character as possible, instrinsicly, in detail, intimately, can do nothing but help build believability and dimension to your character.
Use only the things on this list that you feel are important, but I would like to remind you that the reader learns a lot about a character NOT through exposition (that’s kind of a cheat, and always feels , to me, like a rather clunky way of conveying knowlege), but through their actions, quirks, thoughts, and even through the things they own and carry with them. What kind of food they eat and how they eat it. What they wear. What they carry in their wallets. I encourage you, as writers, to consider these things when creating a character, and encourage you MORE to leave the exposition out and tell us about your character through these other means!
If nothing else, this will give you a LOT to work with when writing with your character. Maybe it’ll spur you to write about the character’s parents. Or the relationship between them and their family. Maybe you’ll find yourself inspired to write something about how they lost everything in a fire - and the importance each remembered lost item held.
There is certainly no rule that says you HAVE to do it this way, but invariably, the most memorable characters are the ones that we as readers can relate with. It’s hard to relate with just words - but people - with beliefs and dreams and fears - that’s something we can get behind.
I certainly hope you find this useful, and since so many have been inclined to reblog and like this, I shall endeavor to add more character creation and writing tips, lists and excercises up on this blog!
Quick and dirty hat drawing tutorial
One of my biggest pet peeves is the amount of artists (including many comics professionals) that do not draw hats properly. Since most of the characters I draw wear them I get a lot of practice. I thought I’d share the basics with you.
Basic Hat Structure- a hat is made up of a crown (the part that covers your head) and the brim (the part that shades your eyes). The crown should be bigger than the head you draw. Always draw the head shape first and work the hat around that. The brim of a hat is NEVER flat. Hats are meant to keep the head warm and the sun off of your eyes. The front of the brim will fold down to give the eyes as much shade as possible. A band or ribbon runs around the bottom of the crown with a faux bow on the left side, mostly for aesthetic purposes.
Top Hats- These are favored by rich ducks everywhere. A proper top hat is made of silk. A lot of top hat-styled hats that are made of wool or felt are more of a coachman’s hat. Fine for cosplay but rather gauche when you’re drawing the Penguin. The traditional top hat will not have a large band and will have a ribbon around the brim. Some top hats have a crown that will collapse flat.
Bowler Hat or Derby- A short brimmed hat. A ribbon also covers the brim. The crown is rounded and made of hard material.
The Fedora- Not the short brimmed, straw trilbys you see hipsters wearing on the back of their heads. A traditional fedora is made of fur felt and has a large crown with a pinch in the front. A larger brim dips in front and traditionally is worn up in back.
Next lesson- we learn about the Homburg!
A visual glossary of braid types
More Visual Glossaries (for Her): Backpacks / Bags / Beads / Bobby Pins / Boots / Bra Types / Belt knots / Chain Types / Coats / Collars / Darts / Dress Shapes / Dress Silhouettes / Eyeglass frames / Eyeliner Strokes / Hairstyles / Hangers / Harem Pants / Hats / Heels / Jackets & Coats / Lingerie / Nail shapes / Necklaces / Necklines / Pants / Patterns (Part1) / Patterns (Part 2) / Plaid / Pleats / Puffy Sleeves / Scarf Knots / Shoes I / Shoes II / Shorts / Silhouettes / Skirts / Skirt Silhouettes / Tartans / Tops / Underwear / Veil Lengths / Vintage Hats / Waistlines / Wedding Gown Silhouettes / Wool
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Here’s a little bit on subplots!
The antagonist is often either one of the most fun things to write, or the most dreaded. But either way, they are a key element of the story, and that cannot be ignored. So, let’s talk about how to make a really great antagonist.
You may have in the past met a writer or teacher or whomever who insists on using the words “protagonist and antagonist” over words like “hero and villain.” Personally, I am not so stingy about it, I feel that I know what you mean anyway so it doesn’t really matter- what there is a legitimate reason as to why you should at least try to think of your villain as your antagonist instead.
And that reason is connotation. Well, denotation too, really- villain and antagonist aren’t completely the same thing, but I’m bringing it down to connotation.
Simply said, when you think of the word “villain”, you’ll think something like “that’s the bad guy in the story.” And when you think of the “antagonist”, you probably think “that’s a fancy word for villain, aka the bad guy in the story.”
But antagonist isn’t just a fancy word. It’s a fancy concept. It means “the guy that opposes the good guy.” That can be on any argument or view. When writing your antagonist is to remember that nothing is black/white, good/bad thinking, and that includes your antagonist.
Let’s map out the steps to making a complex villain- aka, an antagonist.
First, remember that your antagonist (usually) is a person, just like your protagonist. It might help to develop them outside of their intentions first, and put a person to the upcoming reputation.
Chances are, your antagonist didn’t just rise up out of the ground ready to kill. They came from somewhere. Your readers don’t even have to know everything about your antag’s backstory, but you do, if you want to really understand them. It often holds the key reason as to why your antagonist is where they are. The drive behind anger, revenge, change, or pleasing someone else can come from the events in their background.
Why do they hold the beliefs they hold? Were they raised that way? Were they taught by some mentor figure? Were they cover from a reality they couldn’t bear? Are they trying to please someone, or get revenge on someone who displeased them? The answer should be in their background.
Remember, every villain is a hero in their own mind. They believe that what they are doing is necessary, even if they recognize that it is unpleasant. What are they fighting for? Why does it matter to them so much, that they are willing to overlook all the harm they do?
“The Greater Good”: This is one of the more common and understandable villain motives. They believe that what they are doing now is paving the way to a better future. But keep in mind that what your antag views as a “better future” may be very, very different than the average opinion. Maybe a “better future” for them is a genocidal purge or the world ending in flames. Who knows.
That’s not the only type of motive. Be creative. Work with the information you established in your character’s background to find the most reasonable motive.
This is going to be related to your background and motive in an interesting way. Think of your antagonist as a character who has already completed their Character Arc and reached a negative end. Look at the points of change on the character arc- the ones that push your character farther down their path. What are those events? Those are the tipping points that prompted your character towards becoming they way they are now- those key moments where your character had a choice, and they chose to become bitter, hateful, vengeful, cold, or other negative things.
These could be the deaths of loved ones, the promptings of a mentor, or a moment of injustice that made them realize that the world isn’t always kind.
This is the part where you develop them outside of their intentions. How do they behave?
It’s tempting to just say that your villain is a villain because they torture and kill people. But those are not the only things that make a villain a scary or serious threat. Some characters might jump to violence easier than others. Some might be more into psychological torment. Some might actually seem really charming or persuasive, which is frightening in it’s own way- they might actually be tricky enough to confuse you into making bad decisions on your own. Think about your character’s background again. What makes the most sense for them as a person?
This is how your antagonist comes across to others. Keep in mind that your reader and your other characters don’t know your antagonist like you do. How does this person present to the world?
-Are they open to discussion/negotiation?
-Are they open about their intentions?
-How quick are they to violence?
-What are their methods of war?
-When you meet them, are they charismatic, quiet, charming, vulgar? Do they have a sense of humor, or are they stoic?
-Do they seem to enjoy what they are doing, or do they express regrets even as they do it?
What are they willing to do to achieve their goals? Do they have weaknesses in their personal lives?
1. Do they have noble ends behind their controversial means?
2. Is there a line even they won’t cross?
3. Do they have someone/something that they care about?
4. Do they prefer to do the killing/torturing etc themselves or do they just give the order?
Remember that if your antagonist does have any of these moral weaknesses, they are not going to want to show it. One has to keep up intimidating appearances, after all.
Speaking of appearances…
This part is here to tell you what not to do. There are certain appearances that are getting really old with villains.
1. Dressing in all black. Why do they even do that? It’s time to stop associating black with “bad” and white with “good”. It just isn’t like that, so stop making villains all dark and stuff.
2. Scars. I think scars are pretty cool, don’t get me wrong. But if there is no relevant reason for it to be there, don’t talk about it all the time. That goes for all characters, not just villains. Like the color black, scars are not just a villain thing. Everyone has them. Don’t associate them with “bad.”
3. Sexy. I get the idea that making a villain attractive makes them harder to hate, but that can be kind of a cop out of actual complexity. Again, if there is no legitimate reason to make your villain sexy, then don’t. It’s not necessary.
4. Ugly. I hesitate to call any traits inherently ugly, but if you’re striving to make your character unpleasant looking just because they’re bad, then once again, you are associating feature=evil, which is not creative at best and seriously socially harmful at worst.
Basically, your villains should be just as diverse as anyone else. You don’t need stereotypes to make them scary. Sometimes it’s scarier than anything else to just have an average person. It sort of adds to the idea that anyone could be a villain. And that’s pretty frightening.
Key Point:
- Complicate your villains. They’re not just Evil McEvilpants.
That’s it for now, but like anything else in writing, antagonists have a lot of possibility and exceptions. But that was your basic rundown on the things to consider when making a complicated antagonist.
~Penemue
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