Khan: “hello!!! You must be Yeva! It’s nice to meet you!”
They sighlently shake hands wich is followed by Yeva seemingly waving her hands around.
Khan: “uhmm….is that-….is that a solver thing?….”
Yeva freezes and looks confused but does it again.
Khan: “….ok then”
Nori walks up.
Khan: “does she not like me? She wont say anything to me and keeps waving her hands around….does she want me to go away?”
Khan looks genuinely sad that Yeva might not like him.
Nori: “no stupid she’s mute. Don’t you know sign when you see it? She’s complimenting your jacket”
Rec sheets for an A.U of mine- I did the Tawnypelt bloodline cuz one of the AU protagonists is Shadowsight. Should I do Rootspring’s bloodline next since he’s another AU protagonist, or should I do somebody else’s?-
[crosses are not religious! This AU is set in a world where Vampire’s exist and are dangerous, so the cats wear crosses on their collars in order to protect their necks from bite- other supernaturals also exist, hence why Dovewing and Lightleap are listed as Harpy’s and why Shadowsight’s listed as a werewolf-]
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Why are you so precious yet very reckless and stupid?!
“how did you get into writing” girl nobody gets into writing. writing shows up one day at your door and gets into you
...Welp, we've been married for a week now.
Holy crap.
I'll probably draw more later. I've been a bit distracted as you can imagine 🙈 Hope everyone's been well!
For the writers struggling to rid themselves of the classic ‘said’. Some are repeated in different categories since they fit multiple ones (but those are counted once so it adds up to 100 new words).
1. Neutral Tags
Straightforward and unobtrusive dialogue tags:
Added, Replied, Stated, Remarked, Responded, Observed, Acknowledged, Commented, Noted, Voiced, Expressed, Shared, Answered, Mentioned, Declared.
2. Questioning Tags
Curious, interrogative dialogue tags:
Asked, Queried, Wondered, Probed, Inquired, Requested, Pondered, Demanded, Challenged, Interjected, Investigated, Countered, Snapped, Pleaded, Insisted.
3. Emotive Tags
Emotional dialogue tags:
Exclaimed, Shouted, Sobbed, Whispered, Cried, Hissed, Gasped, Laughed, Screamed, Stammered, Wailed, Murmured, Snarled, Choked, Barked.
4. Descriptive Tags
Insightful, tonal dialogue tags:
Muttered, Mumbled, Yelled, Uttered, Roared, Bellowed, Drawled, Spoke, Shrieked, Boomed, Snapped, Groaned, Rasped, Purred, Croaked.
5. Action-Oriented Tags
Movement-based dialogue tags:
Announced, Admitted, Interrupted, Joked, Suggested, Offered, Explained, Repeated, Advised, Warned, Agreed, Confirmed, Ordered, Reassured, Stated.
6. Conflict Tags
Argumentative, defiant dialogue tags:
Argued, Snapped, Retorted, Rebuked, Disputed, Objected, Contested, Barked, Protested, Countered, Growled, Scoffed, Sneered, Challenged, Huffed.
7. Agreement Tags
Understanding, compliant dialogue tags:
Agreed, Assented, Nodded, Confirmed, Replied, Conceded, Acknowledged, Accepted, Affirmed, Yielded, Supported, Echoed, Consented, Promised, Concurred.
8. Disagreement Tags
Resistant, defiant dialogue tags:
Denied, Disagreed, Refused, Argued, Contradicted, Insisted, Protested, Objected, Rejected, Declined, Countered, Challenged, Snubbed, Dismissed, Rebuked.
9. Confused Tags
Hesitant, uncertain dialogue tags:
Stammered, Hesitated, Fumbled, Babbled, Mumbled, Faltered, Stumbled, Wondered, Pondered, Stuttered, Blurted, Doubted, Confessed, Vacillated.
10. Surprise Tags
Shock-inducing dialogue tags:
Gasped, Stunned, Exclaimed, Blurted, Wondered, Staggered, Marvelled, Breathed, Recoiled, Jumped, Yelped, Shrieked, Stammered.
Note: everyone is entitled to their own opinion. No I am NOT telling people to abandon said and use these. Yes I understand that said is often good enough, but sometimes you WANT to draw attention to how the character is speaking. If you think adding an action/movement to your dialogue is 'good enough' hate to break it to you but that ruins immersion much more than a casual 'mumbled'. And for the last time: this is just a resource list, CALM DOWN. Hope that covers all the annoyingly redundant replies :)
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