I Don’t Proofread My Work Because In Between I Might Change My Mind And Not Post It, But Apparently

I don’t proofread my work because in between I might change my mind and not post it, but apparently some people love what I do.

So I yeet it on AO3 and might will look at it much later to fix some stuff

You ever read a fic and you're like. You just Know this hasn't been proofread

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1 year ago
Cat Scarf Pattern // Crochet By Ula
Cat Scarf Pattern // Crochet By Ula
Cat Scarf Pattern // Crochet By Ula

Cat Scarf Pattern // Crochet By Ula


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2 years ago

Not 100% sure I'm reading this right but,

The tiers are intended to encourage actions that are positive for the marketplace and recognise and reward artists who invest time creating and promoting unique products.

Hum... Great, so if you wanted to have a redbubble on the side to make some money then you're basically not welcome???

And seriously I am in tears at that like wow. Basically, if you make enough money for Redbubble, the fee is removed. Basic tiers have to pay a fee, but premium and pro don't.

There's also the "opportunity to create licensed fan art" that bugs me because, there already was a list of things you could make fan art of depending on the list they have, but now you can't unless you have a premium or pro account? While (from what I've seen at least) most small artists make fan art and sell it because they know that there is a fanbase for it and that it will sell.

I do understand the copyright problem they face, sure. But the rest still is... not good.

Over the past few years the amount of new accounts and content has increased significantly on our marketplace. This has resulted in increased costs as we’ve needed greater investment in resources to operate the marketplace and support our artist community and your customers.

So yeah, increased costs that they will make the small artists pay for and subsequently make people think twice before coming on the plateform, or just leave it.


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3 years ago

FUCK YOU DISNEY

Anyways, y’all better start saving your fave fanfics and fanart under the Disney labels cause it looks like they’re trying to curb fair use/fanworks and I’m sure there’s going to be mass panicked deletions even though it’s probably unnecessary cause AO3′s legal team will fight for us.

3 months ago
Cute Little Shoulder Bags As A Gift For My Sibling’s Girlfriend And Her Sister! My Sibling Is Visiting
Cute Little Shoulder Bags As A Gift For My Sibling’s Girlfriend And Her Sister! My Sibling Is Visiting
Cute Little Shoulder Bags As A Gift For My Sibling’s Girlfriend And Her Sister! My Sibling Is Visiting
Cute Little Shoulder Bags As A Gift For My Sibling’s Girlfriend And Her Sister! My Sibling Is Visiting
Cute Little Shoulder Bags As A Gift For My Sibling’s Girlfriend And Her Sister! My Sibling Is Visiting

Cute little shoulder bags as a gift for my sibling’s girlfriend and her sister! My sibling is visiting them for the summer and we wanted to send gifts. These turned out SO cute, I think I’m going to need to make one for myself :D

Pattern: Orange squares and strawberry squares are from Raffamusa design’s Tutti Frutti Granny Square series, while the flower squares are the ‘Dainty Daisy Granny Square’ by Just Be Crafty. The shape and the top half were taken from the ‘Super Easy DIY Crochet Bag’ by August Craft & Crochet!

Yarn: The only one I know is that the green base from the orange granny squares is Debbie Bliss eco in shade 32603. The others are a hodge-podge of DK I already had (potentially Stylecraft Special leftover from a temperature scarf, at least for the oranges), and unlabelled stuff bought from the donation section of my local craft store! I was able to find some cotton yarns with more structure, which was great for the bags!

Label: My lovely new buttons are from VikingLaser on Etsy, who was wonderfully communicative and prompt. The buttons are super cute and good quality - I’d recommend if you’re looking for handmade buttons like this!


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4 years ago
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Chapter: 1/1

Fandom: All Saints Street

Rating: Teen and Up Audiences

Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings

Relationship: Lynn/Ira, Lynn Angel/Ira Blood, Ireland - Relationship

Characters: Lynn Angel, Ira Blood, Neil Bowman; Damao (mention)

Additional tags: Biting, High Lynn, Angst?, Fluff


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3 months ago

Editing Checklist

Editing Software:

StyleWriter 4 is fantastic. It’s an add-on for Microsoft word and has a 14-day trial period. It goes through your text, picks out “glue words”, misspellings, long sentences, homonyms, passive tense, shows your reading grade level, and more.

Editminion *FREE* checks for adverbs, weak words, passive voice, cliches, and homonyms among other things.

Pro Writing Aid is another online editor. It is mostly free, but offers more features if you pay.

AutoCrit offers free analysis for under 500 words, otherwise you have to pay for more text and more editing features.

Paper Rater offers a free service for editing, but it is designed for essays.

Formatting Checklist: This follows the general guide of formatting a manuscript in Microsoft word. However, some literary agents and editors have their own requirements.

Under the paragraph option, change the special indentation to first line at .5”. Change to document to double spaced.

There should be no spaces between paragraphs.

When showing a scene break, center # on a blank line.

Font should be easy to read. Courier New and Times New Roman are preferred at size 12.

All margins should be 1”.

Start chapters on a new page and put the chapter title 1/3 down the page. Write the chapter like so: CHAPTER ONE - CHAPTER TITLE. Press return 4 - 6 times before starting the text of the chapter.

For the header, put YOUR NAME/BOOK TITLE/PAGE NUMBER in the upper right-hand corner. Start this header on the first page of the first chapter.

The cover page of your manuscript should have your name, word count, and contact information in the upper left-hand corner.

The title on the cover page should be in all caps. Your name should be underneath in all caps. If you use a pen name, write YOUR REAL NAME (WRITING AS PEN NAME).

At the end of the manuscript, start a new page and write END.

Self-Editing Checklist:

Spelling:

If you are using Microsoft word for your word processor, use the spell check. After that, go through the manuscript line by line to make sure everything is spelled right. You may have used “form” instead of “from” and skipped it because Microsoft word did not see it as misspelled.

Printing out your work or viewing it in another way (such as a pdf on an ereader) helps find these mistakes.

Beta readers can find what you missed as well.

Use editing software to check homonyms or look up a list of homonyms and find them in your document using ctrl + f. Check these words to make sure you used the right spelling.

Grammar and Style:

First use Microsoft word’s grammar checker, but be aware that it is not always right. Check grammar girl if you are unsure.

For dialogue, you can always pick up a professionally published book and look at how the dialogue tags are used, where commas are placed, and when other punctuation is used.

If you’re in school and your English teacher isn’t too busy, have them take a look at it.

Look out for prepositions. Most of the time, you can omit these words and the sentence will still make sense. Beginner writers use a lot of these in their writing and it slows the flow.

Check for adverbs. You’d be surprised at how many you use in your writing, sometimes up to five a page. Using a few in narration is okay, but only a few. Delete adverbs you find, especially those that end in “-ly”, and rewrite the sentences in necessary.

Delete gerunds and forms of “to be” if writing in past tense. Instead of “were running”, write “ran”.

Check subject-verb agreement.

Use correct dialogue tags. People don’t bark their words. They shout.

Two digit numbers should be written as words (twenty-seven) while numbers with more than two digits should be written with numbers (123).

Avoid passive verbs.

Vary sentence length.

Show with the five senses rather than telling.

Most of the time, you can delete the word “that”.

Avoid using “unique” or “significant” words too often.

Consistency:

Make sure all your font is the same size and type.

Make sure you have no plot holes. Use the comment feature in Microsoft Word to track these plots.

Make sure your time line is consistent.

The tone should fit the scene.

There should be one POV per scene. Unless you’re a brilliant writer and can pull off third person omniscient.

Verb tense should be consistent.

Keep track of the details you release of people, places, and things. The reader will remember if in one chapter you say your protagonist has blue eyes and in another you say green.

Pacing:

The whole book should flow in and out of fast paced scenes to keep your reader interested and slow scenes to give them a break.

The middle should not “sag”.

Sentences should flow smoothly.

Plot:

Keep track of all your plots and sub-plots. Readers will remember them.

There should be a beginning, middle, and end.

Is the initial problem at the beginning of the manuscript?

There should be at least one antagonist. This does no have to be a person.

Is there enough conflict?

There should be a resolution.

All scenes should have something to do with plot.

The climax should be the most exciting part.

Character:

The protagonist should change by the end of the book.

Make sure all characters who come in contact with one another have some kind of relationship, whether good or bad.

Characters must have motivation for everything.

The protagonist must want something right from the start of the conflict.

The protagonist needs to be captivating. The readers wants to root for the protagonist. This does not mean the protagonist needs to be likable all the time.

The readers likes to relate to characters. Make sure your characters are diverse enough that readers can identify with one.

Know who your protagonist is. The main character is not always the same. For example, Nick in The Great Gatsby is the main character, but Jay Gatsby is the protagonist. This is important to know while writing your query letter.

If you can delete a minor character from a scene and nothing changes, then delete that character.

Sometimes you can make two minor characters one without losing any essential parts of the story. If you can, do this.

All characters react and act.

Each character has his or her own life.

Dialogue:

Dialogue should be believable. Read it out loud.

Don’t go overboard with phonetic spelling if a character has an accent.

Dialogue should be informal and natural. It does not have to be grammatically correct.

Prose:

Avoid purple prose. I’ve never met anyone with “emerald eyes” or “hair of fire” (except for the Flame Princess).

Don’t use too many adjectives.

Avoid cliches.

Other:

Don’t info dump. Pace information through dialogue and narration.

The first sentence should spark interest, or at least the first three. If it does, the first paragraph should be the same. And the first 250 words. The goal is to get the reader past the first page.

Let your story rest. When you’re ready to edit, start at the end. Writers tend to get lazy at the end of their story whether they are writing it for the first time or revising it after revising the rest of the story.

Make sure your manuscript is within range for your genre’s word count.


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3 years ago
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An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Chapter: 6/6

Words: 8031

Language: English

Fandom: NSR, No Straight Roads

Rating: Teen And Up Audiences

Warnings: No Archive Warning Apply

Relationships: NeonNova, DJ Subatomic Supernova/Neon J.

Characters: DJ Subatomic Supernova, Neon J. (No Straight Roads), Green | Eloni (No Straight Roads), Blue | Purl-Hew (No Straight Roads), the rest of the kids but they're not mentioned by name


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2 years ago

For this to work btw, you need to have the eraser tool selected.

Better yet, in order to avoid problems such as that:

For This To Work Btw, You Need To Have The Eraser Tool Selected.

Use the eraser all the time to have that:

For This To Work Btw, You Need To Have The Eraser Tool Selected.
Some Images I Made For My Paper Titled “How To Create Artwork In Microsoft Paint With Greater Skill
Some Images I Made For My Paper Titled “How To Create Artwork In Microsoft Paint With Greater Skill
Some Images I Made For My Paper Titled “How To Create Artwork In Microsoft Paint With Greater Skill
Some Images I Made For My Paper Titled “How To Create Artwork In Microsoft Paint With Greater Skill

some images i made for my paper titled “How to create artwork in Microsoft Paint with greater skill than that of your 12-year-old self”


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3 years ago

A persons fanfic tells you a lot about them, i , a fanfic writer, realize in terror


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