L. V., i found this poem on the wall when the paint started to peel off
Feedback for your writing project (sorry this took so long)
I'm not good at writing or giving reviews that's why I'm sending this anonymously but your words are always beautiful and heartwrenching. I think it's generous of you to take the time to listen to other people's stories and write them a poem. This includes people like me who don't write but have a lot on my mind and sometimes I want a poem that I can relate to haha
Thank you and just keep writing. And no criticism from me on the technical level because like I said I'm not a writer. I hope this feedback is okay!
No, this is perfect! Thank you so much. I love listening to people's stories and writing them something based on those experiences. I just get worried sometimes that I might not have been able to capture what they wanted, or do their story justice, as some stories people have sent me, I haven't gone through personally, so I'm glad to hear this. Again, thank you <3
L. V., i found this poem as it wrinkled and went black, plopping to the ground at my feet
L. V., sometimes we don’t need to listen to the reader or the critics or the voices in our head
[i found this poem in my drafts, where it should have remained (pt. 8)]
L. V., i found this poem stuck between a poet's teeth
L. V., i found this poem tracing constellations on your back
L. V., i found this poem stuck between a friend's teeth
there is another speculation too, but i wanted to know your answer—answer only if you wish to.
Now I'm too curious to know what this other speculation is before answering your other ask...
L. V., meet me at the epilogue
L. V., i found this poem in one of the pockets of a coat you left at my place
Poetry. Prose. Free Verse. May explore dark/sensitive themes.
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