L. V., I Found This Poem Drowning In Its Own Blood

Detail of "Girl with a Book" by José Ferraz de Almeida Júnior (1850–1899)
She looks up from her book, eyes focusing on his.

- L. V.
Detail of "Girl with a Book" by José Ferraz de Almeida Júnior (1850–1899)
Everything else is blurry, like a photograph

- L. V.
Detail of "Girl with a Book" by José Ferraz de Almeida Júnior (1850–1899)
that shouldn’t have been taken in the first place.

- L. V.

L. V., i found this poem drowning in its own blood

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11 months ago

okay i just found THE blog

I don't know what this means. Someone tell me what this means.

EDIT:

Editing this to make it my pinned post. If you're new here, this is basically THE blog (as evidenced above). Welcome. I hope you enjoy picking apart the insides of my mind.

This space contains original writings by L. V. (+some experimental edits in between). Two (sometimes more) queued posts per day at 10am & 10pm US/Eastern time.

My Side Blog: where I post writing prompts & tips, post/reblog image prompts: 1 2 3, and share/reblog other art & literature I love.

This is also mine. (+ other side blogs that I won't mention because they're mostly inactive now)

My Photo: Artwork by Grace Cossington Smith My Header: Quote by Toni Morrison


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1 year ago

Feedback for your writing project (sorry this took so long)

I'm not good at writing or giving reviews that's why I'm sending this anonymously but your words are always beautiful and heartwrenching. I think it's generous of you to take the time to listen to other people's stories and write them a poem. This includes people like me who don't write but have a lot on my mind and sometimes I want a poem that I can relate to haha

Thank you and just keep writing. And no criticism from me on the technical level because like I said I'm not a writer. I hope this feedback is okay!

No, this is perfect! Thank you so much. I love listening to people's stories and writing them something based on those experiences. I just get worried sometimes that I might not have been able to capture what they wanted, or do their story justice, as some stories people have sent me, I haven't gone through personally, so I'm glad to hear this. Again, thank you <3


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Original Writings by L. V.

Poetry. Prose. Free Verse. May explore dark/sensitive themes.

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