Right, first review
This fanfiction is in MP3 format and if you have some time to relax and enjoy your fan fiction being read to you PLEASE read this
There are, at this time, only two chapters available though as there are 6 more assigned to be completed I imagine they will be out in short order
Review
The style of writing is fantastic, the narration has a few minor mispronunciations but it’s honestly rather endearing and makes it feel a bit more light. (There is a point where they laugh at it had me giggling along with them)
At times I was tugging at my hair with frustration at bilbos obliviousness which I know will make it all the more worth it when he finally arrives at his destination. The suspense kept me hooked. Every character thus far has been so lovable and felt completely perfect as additions to Tolkiens works, I felt like I was seeing old friends again, like they belonged just as much as the company themselves. Not a single sentence in this story feels out of place. It is a well made path to a finale i am so excited to see.
This fic is a labour of love.
10/10, there are literally no notes, it’s a gem.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/63007633/chapters/161362978
https://archiveofourown.org/works/63007633/chapters/161362978
Bilbo you can’t just stare like that buddy..
tried some new brushes.. bilbo’s reaction as a bonus:
I hate when your brain plays the old “crazy how your sitting here right now reading and one day you’ll be dead” card
Like yeah, that’s how this works buddy. Thanks for making me feel depressed for no reason though I guess
Biwbee my baby baby baby boy
I need to actually learn how to draw both him and thorin correctly so when I draw then as little goobers they still look right. I fee intimidated but I think I’m doing okay
Finished concept drawing of Erebor Bilbo
Yes I did full line art and color. No do not expect me to use this much will power again.
(Plus the sketches)
The lack of brain cells in that room is staggering
Please like this I worked on it all week
“Come on my boy.. your papa is expecting us”
Thorin enjoys his father-son bonding time but he can’t help but get a bit emotional.
When did his little Frodo get so big?
Every day at school we have 30 minutes to make a pendant
May I present to you my prized mango seed necklace on hemp cord with faux Pearl.
I call her “hard won prize” lmfao
And then you sit down to write and your ideas scatter like autumn leaves 😭
Becoming a writer is great because now you have a hobby that haunts you whenever you don’t have time to do it
👏👏👏
FRECKLED BILBO PREACH!!!
The shire is warm for most of ther year and when it’s cold is doesn’t drop far below seven degrees
Erebor is fucking cold. Temps drop to around minus fifteen.
Bilbo is not build for these conditions and nearly gets frost bite in the tips of his ears and his toes and Thorin panics and makes him little fur lined leather boots that are soft and flexible but still provide enough warmth to stop his toes falling off.
Bilbo also has to wear a hat and ties his hair back as it grows so he doesn’t realize how much his hair has grown by spring and when he takes the hat off Thorin is gawking
I’m actually a jeweler, I just love Bagginshield🥲18+ account, no terfs
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