Writing advice from my uni teachers:
If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
“I love it when I see old couples together, because it makes me believe that true love does exist.”
— Unknown
“I’d cut my soul into a million different pieces just to form a constellation to light your way home. I’d write love poems to the parts of yourself you can’t stand. I’d stand in the shadows of your heart and tell you I’m not afraid of your dark.”
— Andrea Gibson
The best advice really is to just write. Write badly - purple prose, stilted conversations, rambling descriptions. Don’t delete it, pass go, take your $200, save all your garbage in a big folder. Look at how much you’ve made - it doesn’t matter if it isn’t perfect, isn’t polished, it was practice. Every time you write you learn a little more, and find another piece of your voice.
“Have you ever just looked at someone while they’re doing something small like driving or laughing and just smile bc u like them so much.”
— Unknown
Character development doesn't refer to character improvement in a moral or ethical respect. It refers to broadening the audience's understanding of that character, giving the character a deeper background, clearer motivations, a unique voice.
Developing a character is about making them seem more like a real person, and real people are flawed. Real people make mistakes. They repeat mistakes. They do things other people don't agree with. Real people are more than just 'good' or 'bad' and character development is about showing all of those other aspects of them.
Their interests and hobbies. The song that gets stuck in their head. The fact that their vacuum broke 3 months ago and they haven't gotten it fixed yet. All of those details help build out the character and develop them more.
And yes, characters change as stories progress but that doesn't mean they get 'better' in a strict moral sense. It means that their experiences change the way they interact in the world you've written for them. Just like real people do.
hi! i hope you’re doing well do you have a list of words to describe facial expressions? also, words to describe laughter? thank you :))
I’ve sort of taken this ask as an opportunity to make a “collection” of my resources for vocabulary, description, etc. Below is a list of articles that one would find helpful for writing description (of mostly anything).
The Vocabulary & Resources
All About Colors
A Writer’s Thesaurus
Words To Describe Body Types and How They Move
Words To Describe… (Face, Facial Expressions, and General Behavior)
Resources For Describing Characters
Resources For Describing Emotion
Describing Setting
Resources For Describing Physical Things
Describing Heartbreak
Utilizing The Vocabulary
Using Vocabulary
Expanding Your Vocabulary
Describing Where Your Characters Are
Balancing Detail & Development
When To Use “Felt”
Showing Vs Telling
How To Better Your Vocabulary & Description
Adding Description
Tips on Descriptions
Giving Characters Stage Business
Additionally:
How To Develop A Distinct Voice In Your Writing
Showing VS Telling in First Person POV
Writing In Third Person POV
Improving Flow In Writing
How To “Show Don’t Tell” More
What To Cut Out of Your Story
Editing & Proofreading Cheat Sheet
A Guide To Tension & Suspense
On Underwriting
Ultimate Guide To Symbolism
Expanding Scenes
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