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Writing advice from my uni teachers:
If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
"why did you think i'd be mad at you? of course i'm not mad at you. it's just one broken cup. there are seven hundred other cups."
"you're okay. i promise you're okay."
"it's not your fault. it's not your fault."
(of MC's birth father) "did he hurt you again? going to beat him up one of these days i swear to god. come, let's get ice cream."
"you seem in dire need of cookies."
"oh, honey, come here." (hugging) "it's okay to be vulnerable, okay?"
"are you doing okay?"
"don't say you're sorry, please, you didn't even do anything."
"can't sleep?"
"are you sick? no, no, you're staying home. i'll make you soup and put on a disney movie you're not going anywhere like that."
"have you eaten?"
"i love you as much as my children, and no one hurts my children."
"nightmares?"
"you don't have to do anything, just rest. please."
"you're going to hurt yourself. take a break."
part. 2
Person A: "Your family is quite... unique."
Person B: "You can say batshit, I don't mind. They'd probably be flattered if you did actually."
Person A: "I take it this is common behaviour for them then?"
Person B: "Very.... Still sure you want in on this? Now that you know what they're like..."
Person A: "...I won't lie, it'll take some getting use to... but honestly? I already prefer the way yours behave as opposed to mine. As intense as they were, they at least seemed to genuinely care about each other..."
choose your fighter
minecraft has this deep deep sense of underlying dread but it also has this sense of tentative hope about it. sometimes you can hear echoes of minecarts in the caves. 11, 13, and 5 are all recordings of some nameless wordless fear that was encountered deep in the caves. and the universe said i love you because you are love. you the player can bring light and meaning back to these lost places. everything not lost will be saved
Good morning turtles it’s the last day at sea I’m eating room service and stumbling upon the source of my art block
“Avoiding what you feel you must write is as much a part of writing”
Ohhhh
“I don’t want to be a burden” you’re more like a relief, a gift, a blessing actually
Bro gathering
Pls draw narilamb doing you know what
(plus who is the bottom?)
Dude, I have commissions open. You can just pay me to draw it.