I Was Walking Through Walmart And My Mum Pointed To This And Went “hey It Looks Just Like You”

Uhh... Can my brain like just like stop?

What am I getting notifications from!?! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhghhhhhhh!!!

I've decided I'm going to read some fan fiction. 

I’m really bored.

Golden

A scream cut through the silence of the night. I knew immediately what had happened and got to him as quick as possible.

Cyrus was bolt up right. His black hair was a mess and he was running his fingers through it and staring at the ground.

" What happened? "

" I-it was m-my mom and a- alice. But it wasent really my mom it was just her eyes. The way she looked at me like a predator stares down its prey. " he suddenly started crying. " dammit she was right. I can't even defend myself from my own mind. " he tried to hide his face and went almost completely still.

" Don't cry. None of us can defend ourselves from our minds. " I pulled up my sleeve. " I let my mind run me for to long. Let's wage the war on our subconscious together and learn to create tools to fight against the shadows that burn our minds. " their was one long scar on my arm and around it the words " your fault" over and over again.

He suddenly started crying harder.

" wait... Did I say the wrong thing? What did I do? "

" no it's not that it's just your the first person that cared when I cried. " his eyes went dark as he started looking down.

" your also just the first person that showed me any kind of affection. " as he said this he got slightly pink and a slight smile formed on his face.

" Your eyes look beautiful when you smile. It's like removing the clouds from the sunrise. " 

Same 

Someone give me a sentence and I'll make it into a short story

Why is every tattoo shop's website red and black?

yesterday’s inktober, inspired by “a wolf at the door” by radiohead

Thank you! I'm happy you like it!

From @lexi-dermain 

To: @headfrst4halos

Okay so it said I could choose between any combination of daniel, Armand, lestat and Louis so I chose daniel and Armand sense they are my comfort characters. I was also able to choose between night island and current for timing, I chose night island becouse it meant human daniel was okay. Then as you can tell I drew them ice skating! Because I just thought it would be cute. i do really actually like how it turned out. I still want to add a few finishing touches but for now it’s nice. P.s. sorry I submitted for checkins late, I had to do something with my family

• your aloud to be passionate about a dumb story

writers:

break up your paragraphs. big paragraphs are scary, your readers will get scared

fuuuuck epithets. “the other man got up” “the taller woman sat down” “the blonde walked away” nahhh. call them by their names or rework the sentence. you can do so much better than this (exception: if the reader doesn’t know the character(s) you’re referring to yet, it’s a-okay to refer to them by an identifying trait)

blunette is not a thing

new speaker, new paragraph. please.

“said” is such a great word. use it. make sweet love to it. but don’t kill it

use “said” more than you use synonyms for it. that way the use of synonyms gets more exciting. getting a sudden description of how a character is saying something (screaming, mumbling, sighing) is more interesting that way.

if your summary says “I suck at summaries” or “story better than summary” you’re turning off the reader, my dude. your summary is supposed to be your hook. you gotta own it, just like you’re gonna own the story they’re about to read

follow long sentences w short ones and short ones w long ones. same goes for paragraphs

your writing is always better than you think it is. you just think it’s bad because the story’s always gonna be predicable to the one who’s writing it

i love u guys keep on trucking