Yo I loved reading this tysm for tagging me in it!! đ
special notes before we begin--In case I didn't mention it before...I'm getting through the first re-watch of what I'm sure is a Bochum performance dubbed over in English, so in case everything doesn't quite add up yet, it should be better by the time I'm finished with the next two parts.
Second, I've seen the character of Electra described with both the pronoun sets of 'he/him' and 'they/them' in this fandom, so it only seemed fair to continue this in my writing just in case it really is both.
Third, I'm writing this version of Greaseball as a person whose own school bus bully had to rethink his entire life after almost dying in a car accident...so, this one in particular might (re) grow up a lot more during the course of this little experiment.
And fourth, but also the most important...in no way are the villains described in this going to end up winning. ;)
That being said, here is the first installment on what I think could continue the Starlight Express plotline, if by some odd chance it got transformed into an animated film sequel and had a few horror elements added to it.
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DINAH:
First things firstâŚDinah was right about the cheating.
So right, in fact, that one fateful day, she finds herself promoted to the new Track Safety Council, a new invention created by the Track Marshals and effective immediately. Dinah is joined in this by Joule, who, thanks to a certain accident in their employerâs judgment, is perhaps out of work and in need of a new occupation. As these four start putting their minds together and plan for the next race, thereâs the underlying sentiment, however vague, that maybe there shouldnât be any more Cabooses allowed to compete no thanks to the last one that very nearly ruined it for everybody else. When the time comes for someone to ask about just where C.B. is now, however, Dinah firmly responds that sheâs cut off all contact, and is more than ready to forget they ever spoke in the first place.
After all, thereâs a new champion in town, and they all should start thinking of the future.
RUSTY:
The focus then shifts to Rusty, whoâs more or less basking in the limelight after his first-ever victory. Remember all that flak he received from darn near everyone for daring to enter the raceâŚ? Well, buckle up, naysayers, because heâs using his brand-new influence as this yearâs champion to effect a little change around here. According to a post-race interview with the Press Truck, his first task is keeping one gear to the ground to weed out all future cheatersâŚbut second on the list, maybe itâs time to expand both the freight yard AND the adjacent garage for a few âadditional guestsâ. And whoâs at the top of this guest list? Thatâs right, everybodyâŚ
PEARL:
Pearl might not have won the championship, but she sure won the championâs heartâand, to the delight of everyone at the freight yard, she just might be moving in there to stay. This means that her social circle just got five times bigger, and thatâs just the minimum! Remember Dustin, the Big HopperâŚ? Well, take a seat at the table, girlie, because heâs her big brother now.
The same goes for all three of The Hip-Hoppers, because even though they donât give free rides to hitchhikers, theyâll certainly make an exception for her so that she never feels left behind.
Flat-Top is still a little shy around her as she's still very much new to him...yet, he manages to promise her a look at his 'secret brick collection', a thing he only shows off to trains he makes friends with.
Oh, and as far as Poppa McCoy is concerned, sheâs allowed over for dinner whenever she needs it, no questions asked.
In other words, welcome to the Freight Family, a sentiment that hits home as soon as Rusty returns, and goes straight in for a kiss as the others erupt in cheers and applause.
However.
Thereâs a brief scene in an area lit only by an active fireplace, the flames reaching almost to the top of the stonework as a lone figure in a dark leather chair awaits news of the raceâs complete results. Itâs here that a nameless Assistant, their face completely hidden by a piston helmet, skates in with a copy of the local newspaperâŚbut doesnât go any further than the door, as something about that newspaper has made them far too terrified to share it with their âBossâ. This same boss, his own face backlit into shadow by the fire, smugly invites the Assistant to give him âthe great newsâ, as it shouldnât be any different than all the races before.
Once the paperâs in his hand and he gives it a hard look, thoughâŚthatâs when all hell seems to break loose, for only a few seconds later, this âBossâ is crumpling the paper up in one fist as his furious shout of âMCCOYYYYYYY!â is both a question and a curse as the fire goes out, plunging that area into total darkness.
Back at the Coachesâ ClubâŚitâs getting just a teensy bit quiet around here. The international engines like Espresso and Turnov have all returned to their respective garages back home; Pearlâs possibly moving out; Dinahâs busy doing who knows what these days, and oh yeahâŚzero sign of Greaseball since âThe Big Crashâ.
In fact, itâs now becoming SO lonely that Ashley wonders out loudâin between cigarettes, of courseâwhether or not they might even have positions any more, since the focus might be solely on Rusty and Pearl as the next âpowered-up coupleâ and very little attention is given to those who donât get first place.
Buffy tries to remain optimistic, since the next race is still many months away and, if Rustyâs victory proves it, literally anything can happen. After she voices her concern that more steamers might show up for that next race, though, and all of them with their own coaches already, thatâs when Ashley wonders if âanythingâ having the chance to happen might be the worst thing of all.
Cue a faint whistling in the distance, one that sounds an awful lot like the notes of C.B.âs signature tuneâŚand then itâs back to Joule and Dinah.
Joule starts grilling Dinah just a little about her 'checkered history' with a certain dishonest engine, and wonders out loud whether or not there will be any 'conflicts of interest' going forward. Dinah, on the other hand, states that her own conscience is clear, and then goes on to hint that this 'dishonest engine' Joule just referred to is about to learn a few more tough lessons after his 'accident'âŚbeginning with his successful conversion to steam.
Cut back to the Freight Family, who by this time has gone into full celebration mode. Sweet little Rusty is faking a dramatic struggle as the Hip-Hoppers move in, messing up his hair, giving bear hugs, giving pretend interviews about what it feels like to dethrone Greaseball, all the things that big brothers do. Poppa McCoy watches all of this in silent amusement, as his boy has now grown up, found a Coach, and everything feels like it's all uphill from here.
Once Rusty finally begs Pearl to come save him from the avalanche, she laughs a little before pulling him away, asking the others to 'let the champ breathe'. It's here that Rusty starts playing the interview game, and asks her 'what's next for the greatest Coach in the world'. Pearl admits that she's still figuring things out as she goes along, but at least she won't have to do it by herself any more.
At this moment, Pearl has settled in a little; yet at the same time, she knows that there are a few faces missing, and doesnât waste any time asking after Electra and Greaseball. Electra answers this question himself by making a dramatic entrance, complete with the announcement, âPardon the interruption, but The Patient is awakeâ. Flat-Top automatically disappears out of view after this, as he seems to be the one whoâs either volunteered or been drafted to look after them. Either way, heâs gone for a small amount of time, as the actions off-screen/backstage are currently unclear.
Meanwhile, the focus is certainly upon Electra, as there are a few who seem genuinely concerned about them all of a sudden. Electra himself doesnât appear too devastated by the accident, however, as suggested by the direct quote of âIâve had worseâ.
Just the same, though, he reluctantly follows up by stating that Wrench, aka âThe Repair Truckâ, might be needed for a little while longerâor, at least, until they can all be sure that this âSteam Conversionâ procedure doesnât turn out to do more harm then good. Pearl, after beginning to put two and two together, asks if she should go and get Dinah here as well, for itâs now almost a given as to who âThe Patientâ isâand, after a few things in the back get knocked over and Flat-Topâs yelling for them to get the freight back hereâŚout comes old Greaseball himself, his chest wrapped in bandages and the visible bits of a new boiler vest underneath. Heâs probably entered the disorientation phase of waking up as a Steamer, too, because he has to actually stop and give himself a good knock on the plates in order to remember just what he signed himself up for.
GREASEBALL:
With a bit more extra weight on top and no more juice to get out of there, however, Greaseball attempts to gun the engines and automatically collapses due to no fuel. Pearl takes the awkward silence that follows as her cue to go get Dinah; Flat-Top comes along just in time to haul Greaseball off the ground, and the rest of the Freight Family are either hanging back cautiously, asking if nowâs the time to introduce Greaseball to âCoal Flakesâ, or, in Rusty's case, watching him like a hawk with narrowed eyes just in case he tries anything stupid later.
As for Electra, they just can't help but casually comment that the fastest train in the world isnât speeding his way out of this one.
Cut back to Ashley, who is now by herself after Buffy has exited the scene for a time. She happens upon an old poster of all four Coaches posing as though for a photo booth, and visibly looks wistful over the thought that they might all be going their separate ways.
At this same time, she isn't quite paying attention as a nearby voice asks her if she's also 'missing the old days', as well as whether or not she'd like to see her group come together again. Thinking that Buffy has returned, Ashley does her best to shrug it all off, as ânot every Coach sticks around foreverâ even if she'd like them to. The voice takes on an impatient, even demanding tone, though, and insists that Ashley herself 'might not last very long' now that steam is about to make a comeback. Unable to ignore her curiosity, Ashley passes through an unseen gate to reveal the impounded C.B., his wheels supposedly locked up so that he can't attempt any more train crashes.
C.B.:
Upon hearing Ashley's question as to why he wasn't torn apart after his own accident, C.B. merely laughs and suggests that it will take a lot more than one mistake to derail him. He also puts the idea into Ashley's head that if she 'ever wants to see her friends again...perhaps it's time to start doing some derailing of her ownâ.
One more scene between Dinah and Pearl follows after this one, during which Pearlâs asking her to come to the freight yard as expected. Dinah automatically guesses that the ârebuilding procedureâ may have been successful, yet just the same has to ask whether or not âsomebody (Greaseball) is causing trouble againâ. Pearl reassures her that âthe odds are way more in Rustyâs favor nowâ, yet just the same believes her being there may keep things relatively calm between everyone. As Dinah follows her out, though, the echoes of C.B.âs theme are still replaying in her memory, for even though she and Greaseball may have reconciledâŚwell, thereâs always the chance of his old âhabitsâ coming back in other ways.
On a different track, though, as day is turning into night and the surrounding landscape grows darkâŚthere are a few seconds where everything suddenly becomes a dark shade of red, the same sinister voice belonging to âThe Bossâ orders âThe Assistantâ to wake up âThe Other Sixâ, and that theyâve got some work to doâthen the scenery goes back to normal right before all fades to black.
End Part One.
im with AM on this one
oouugghh the quality looks fucked up.. ssiiigghhhghghhmrmhghmrhmg
Whiteboardfox doodle yay
âLolllll English teachers read into everything like itâs not that deep broâ
I will bite your nose off. I will sink my teeth into the cartilage and tear. No one in your high school English class thought you were funny. No one thought you were clever when you snickered about âblue curtainsâ behind the underpaid teacherâs back. I would say you peaked in high school if not for the fact you actually peaked in middle school. You need to wake up. You werenât cool in school, youâre not cool now. Devaluing the desperate but failed efforts your teachers made to teach you reading comprehension doesnât make you look cool. You look so dumb right now, and Iâm going to bite your nose off. How are you gonna turn up your nose to the work of writers when you donât have one?
I saw this comment and immediately thought âI need more people to see thisâ
this websiteâs easy watch. *dangles a bunch of greek gods like keys*
I saw this comment and immediately thought âI need more people to see thisâ
irl AM
Actually SUCH a good song I canât đđ
Coda of freight something something something coda of freight đť
omg itâs real
GUYS
I just watched the illegal sequel to Starlight Express and
WHAT (âĽď¸Łďšáˇ âĽáˇ )
What did he do??
So the plot of it is that after the championship they think Rusty cheated so they go again. Pearl isnât his love interest anymore and sheâs really out of character, sheâs like super mean for no reason but whatever.
Anyways, everyone originally there can race BUT Greaseball so his brother Pacific Blue(who isnât blue, he looks exactly like Greaseball with the same costume so uh, maybe theyâre twins?) races instead. Rusty races with this new pink girl who I donât remember the name of, but sheâs exactly like Pearl. Rusty and her win the race and they all do a dance and stuff.
Iâm very confused on like⌠everything. I donât want to make fun of amateur performers so I wonât be talking about the costumes or the singing, but the music was very weird. It was like⌠mid-2010s radio music which isnât Starlight Express AT ALL.
I also just donât get the plot? Everything wouldâve been the same if Greaseball raced and Pearl and Rusty were still together(except GB would have a different race partner) but they added in these new characters for no reason. They donât even have new personalities or look that different, they just exist to exist.
Oh Starlight Express: The Next Generation how you confuse me
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