It's A Real Struggle...

It's a real struggle...

trying to steer dialogue towards a certain plot point while trying to make it sound natural

Trying To Steer Dialogue Towards A Certain Plot Point While Trying To Make It Sound Natural

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6 years ago

And you keep learning; the journey never stops. Not without you. Not with you. Thx for that.

part of being an adult is living with regret and not allowing it to consume you. the older you get, the more mistakes you make, the more opportunities you missed, the more people you’ve let down. forgive yourself. don’t beat yourself up. you’re still learning: this is a journey.

4 years ago

Status, igen, komprimeret.

Affaldsfuglene kradser stadig mønstre i det hårde lag luft lige over jorden. Det både ulæselige og ubehageligt genkendelige krimskrams må stadig være en besked, men stadig uden en modtager. Stadig ikke til at tyde, men stadig og mere nærgående vedkommende. Der er stadig lige langt til de tågede trætoppe, der stadig er eneste lille klemte horisont, og de forsvinder igen når de føler sig iagttaget.…

Status, Igen, Komprimeret.

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4 years ago

Når jeg...

Når jeg…

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7 years ago
BLINDFOOLED. He's Totally Baffled. Once Again. So Confused, That He's Glued To The Ground. It Happens

BLINDFOOLED. He's totally baffled. Once again. So confused, that he's glued to the ground. It happens so often, too often, he's beginning to suspect something obstructing his moving around in this world. The failure might be a wrong wiring in his brain. But it's hard to tell: Like thoughts thinking thoughts about themselves. Like a mind being scrutinized by itself: Like… Now this tree. Is the slight quivering at the top for real? Are the tiny twigs above actually trembling? He can't move past that puzzle. Could it be a reflection? If so, reflected in him or by something outside his hyperventilating mind? Or, just to make things more complicated, a combination? Whatever possible, he makes into a metaphysical question. And, as we know, anything is possible. The tree begins to feel uncomfortable. Being observed so close, it shifts and moves, uneasy, just to avoid that stare. Checkmate! Or maybe he just need new glasses… #mantelmomento #danielmantel #udenfilter #meltdown #wiring #baffling #foolingmyself #mindless #thinkingtoomuch #unreal #stupidtreeinmywaystopsmeinmyexploringrealityasifanythingisrealforreal (Usual one-off hashtag) (her: The Middle of No-where)


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4 years ago
DAGEN UDEN AFSTAND! Den Ene Skulle Ikke Være Vågnet Idag! Så Meget Var Vi Enige Om. Lige Fra Vi Slog

DAGEN UDEN AFSTAND! Den ene skulle ikke være vågnet idag! Så meget var vi enige om. Lige fra vi slog øjnene op, og stirrede ind i dem.

4 years ago

Sommersjov.

SOMMER SKOV (2)

Han går en tur. Eller turen går ham, det er uden betydning. Det betyder alt, alt er ikke meget, alt for lidt.  Himlen bliver hvidere, kommer tættere på. Presser hans skridt for skridt til krøllen asfalt op omkring hans fødder. Det er da bedre end brødkrummer, når tilbageturen skal findes. Han holder øje med et vendepunkt. Der burde være tydeligere skiltning!  En metalgrøn hæk kvidrer som besat.…

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4 years ago
Sommersjov II. Sommeren Raser Afsted. Som En Flok Rabies-befængte Klaprende Rævesakse. Nej, Det Er

Sommersjov II. Sommeren raser afsted. Som en flok rabies-befængte klaprende rævesakse. Nej, det er ikke retfærdigt. Det er ikke alle rævesakse der har rabies.

7 years ago

Prolog og Epilog.

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  (Følgende prolog og epilog blev tilføjet uden at jeg var blot i nærheden af tastatur eller skærm. De var der bare en tilfældig gang jeg åbnede det oprindelige dokument. At jeg kender personerne i pro- & epilog, har nok en betydning. Det giver mig en lille fordel. Jeg kender dem. Eller netop ikke: De kan næppe vade ind i en hvilkensomhelst tekst og sætte deres aftryk; smide nogle linjer og…

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7 years ago

True...

Writer’s Curse

Writer’s Curse

You start with a thought,      a word,           a sentence,                a verse.                     Then you curse.

You work on grammar,      syntax,           synonyms,                meter,                     then you have a rhyme.

You struggle with meaning,      homonyms,           depth,                time                     why not be retro.

You try to rhyme orange,      banal,           succor,                rose.                     Why rhyme rose? I think I’ll do prose.

You take the paper; cross out,      replace,           erase,                wad it up and throw it out.                     Then you shout it out.

You grab a new thought, piece of paper,      new words,           cup of coffee.                new verse,                     And that is the writer’s curse.

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7 years ago

FEJLSPEJL/SPEJLFEJL

FEJLSPEJL

Fb-farvel # 1. Ud af ?… (-Og andet på høje tid om ikke for sent…)

Så står du altså i den famøse tunnel. Og ser lyset for enden. Det skal man som bekendt gå imod, hvilket du så gør. Det er nu også det mest logiske, uanset hvorfor og hvordan du er endt i en mørk tunnel med et lys for enden. Først er det som om du ingen vegne kommer, og tanken om et godt gammeldags mareridt er lige ved at overtage.…

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