Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.

Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.
Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.
Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.
Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.
Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.
Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.
Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.
Hey Guys I Just Finished A Draft For One Of The Stories In My Comic But Could Really Use Some Critique.

hey guys i just finished a draft for one of the stories in my comic but could really use some critique. basically ive been interviewing multicultural people and then writing short comics based on our conversations. i think ive been staring at it too long and need a fresh pair of eyes. please be harsh idc. are the drawings too stiff or monotonous? do i need to add more background? is it written ok should i rewrite anything?

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I've been on a bit ob a Russell Crowe movie binge in the past few weeks and since he is almost sixty now, many of the movies I've watched were consequently older movies. and when I watched them, it struck me again, how much hollywood has changed in the last few decades when it comes to depicting men.

take Gladiator for example from the year 2000. Russell Crowe plays basically an action hero in it. he is a big, muscly dude, who is very strong and uses that strength to defeat his enemies. and this is what he looks like:

I've Been On A Bit Ob A Russell Crowe Movie Binge In The Past Few Weeks And Since He Is Almost Sixty

looks like a strong man, right?

in the same year, Hugh Jackman as Wolverine looked like this in the first X-men movie:

I've Been On A Bit Ob A Russell Crowe Movie Binge In The Past Few Weeks And Since He Is Almost Sixty

in 2013 the same character played by the same actor looked like this:

I've Been On A Bit Ob A Russell Crowe Movie Binge In The Past Few Weeks And Since He Is Almost Sixty

it's a bit much, isn't it? I mean, he looks so skinny.

and if we go even further back: look at what the womanizer character Face from the A-team looked like in the 80s show vs the 2010 movie reboot:

I've Been On A Bit Ob A Russell Crowe Movie Binge In The Past Few Weeks And Since He Is Almost Sixty

maybe the difference isn't that big but it really startled me when I watched that movie for the first time. in my mind there was no reason why Face should be particularly muscular since he is the charming one not the one known for being particularly strong.

if we go even further back, look at the charmin womanizer character Hawkeye in M*A*S*H from the 70's.

I've Been On A Bit Ob A Russell Crowe Movie Binge In The Past Few Weeks And Since He Is Almost Sixty

I know he's a doctor and there is no reason for him to be ripped but I got the feeling if they did the show now, he would be.

I don't know what my point really is I'm just saying I got a bit nostalgic when watching these men. I cannot be the only one who'd rather see more of this:

I've Been On A Bit Ob A Russell Crowe Movie Binge In The Past Few Weeks And Since He Is Almost Sixty

than this:

I've Been On A Bit Ob A Russell Crowe Movie Binge In The Past Few Weeks And Since He Is Almost Sixty

also, as a sidenote: Russell Crowe gained a lot of weight for the nice guys and he is a fucking powerhouse in that film, like, when he punches someone, you really feel it because of the weight that is behind it and the shere mass of his body.

I've Been On A Bit Ob A Russell Crowe Movie Binge In The Past Few Weeks And Since He Is Almost Sixty

(even if this may look different, he's about to break Ryan Gosling's character's arm. I couldn't find a gif of him punching someone but I swear it looks painfull as hell.)

so, in short: can we get big, heavy action guys back? cause I'm tired of seeing these skinny, despite being muscular dudes who look dehydrated as hell and on steroids.

and can we stop making characters ripped just for the sake of it? cause I'd rather cuddle with a guy looking like Hawkeye than one looking like Face from the new A-team movie.

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