Horrible at taking photos of my traditional art but here’s some Noelle.
Surprisingly my interest in her is fairly recent, I didn’t care much for her at the time of chapter two release. Not sure why I’m so fond of her now.
Preach 🙏🙏
(In no particular order)
1. “You can’t edit a blank page.”
Yes, you can't. Sometimes it's hard to get the words out but even if it's crap get it out. Produce something into existence, then fix it. Who won't know what to fix if you've not written anything yet. Get those words out on the damn paper.
2. “Show, don’t tell—except when you should tell.”
I mean, this one takes time to figure out. When exactly should you skip the showing and just tell. Hit and trial guys. And then there's always book reviewers who'll tell-you-like-it-is. I don't think this is black and while. Only show or only tell. Maybe it lies in a gray area sometimes. The Goldilocks point where your narration hits just right.
3. “Write the book you want to read.”
This was one of the reasons I started writing. When you so desperately need to read a book with that vibe, that aesthetic and those specific character troupes in such a setting... You're like fuck it. I'll write it myself. How hard can it be?
Spoiler Alert: it will destroy you and your self esteem. Good luck!
4. “Don’t compare your first draft to someone else’s final draft.”
I've seen many versions of this explained through memes. One of them I remember is: it's like you're judging your raw materials (the batter) with someone's 3 tier cake. And that is being blatantly unfair to yourself.
5. “Make your characters want something, even if it’s just a glass of water.”
We all have motivations, wants, desires. So do your characters. A character without desire feels dry, flat and uninteresting.
6. “The best way to improve your writing is to read more than you write.”
Reading other authors’ work, especially those whose writing you admire, teaches you things that can’t be learned through theory or workshops alone. You’ll pick up on pacing, voice, structure, and character troupes. If you're like me you'd start noticing a trend. Or cliche lines that are repeatedly used.
7. “Your first draft is just you telling yourself the story.”
Write for you this means. For you. You wanted this story. It's for you to explore the plot, the characters, the world. It’s your chance to get everything down and see where it leads, without worrying about perfection.
8. “Write with the door closed, rewrite with the door open.”
This is one of Stephen King’s rules of writing, and it’s a brilliant one. When you’re drafting, don’t worry about anyone else reading your work. It’s your time to be raw and experimental. But when it comes to revising, open that door—let others in for feedback, because the revision process is where the magic happens.
That's it. My limited knowledge presented to you. You must've heard of many of these already. But just in case.... 💛
Preach that shit 🙏🙏🙏
...improvement isn't only in the big things like writing a 10k story in one sitting or responding positively to negative comments on your work. Progress is in the seemingly small but actually big things too;
You finally learned how to correctly spell that word you frequently use.
2. You found a differently word you can use in place of the verb you've abused
3. You wrote a whole ass paragraph for your draft without feeling insecure about it because you're finally understanding that drafts are meant to be messy.
4. It's taking you months to complete the next chapter of your story. At first you felt bad about it every second of your day but now you actually haven't felt bad for a whole hour. Slowly you're understanding that art takes time and you deserve to be patient and kind with yourself.
5. You took the step to read/listen to a random post about how to write better. Maybe you haven't put that advice into practice yet but hey, you clicked on it and listened/read till the end
6. You managed to read one of your own posted stories, I'll feelings about it or no
7. You now celebrate every vote/kudos/like you get on your story because you know that a real human being is behind it, loving your work, shoddy as you think it might be.
8. Today you woke up caring a little less about how your stories aren't that popular in the fandom. Finally you're learning to write for you and to just dwell on enjoying the writing process instead of focusing on how the world will receive your story when you post
9. You read comments on your story which suggest you take your story in a certain different direction, but you successfully ignore those suggestions and courageously stick to the story you want to tell.
10. You ended the day still resisting the urge to have AI write your story for you.
Congratulations to you, most improved writer, even if only one of the items on this list resonates with you👏👍🤝
You're still growing and improving after all.
Not counting Neil, everyone here references someone! Can you guess them all?
That video of Alex Hirsch reading S&P notes for Gravity Falls conveys a few things to me:
1) the U.S. entertainment industry (especially animation) is run by older conservative types who make up offensive terms and get really mad about them.
2) the people who run Disney would be the first to fall in line with a fascist regime.
3) most of the media we consume is tailor-made and watered-down to appeal to the tastes of older, deeply religious conservative audiences.
4) conservatism, not the left, is and always has been the biggest voice of censorship in American culture.
It’s here, guys.
The inspiration for this story belongs to @smz-s-mz Sans and Papyrus(and Lesser Dog) belong to Toby Fox Aliza belongs to sourapplestudios
TW: Description of severe injury, mentions of cannibalism
(Horrortale Flowey isn’t in this because I had no idea how to write him in and he leaves before Aliza goes to Waterfall anyway)
Enjoy! :)
Day 3
normal sibling behavior
Fuck ai.
Don't give up on your art. It's main goal to stop you from creating media and use it to replace it.
Don't stop writing fanfics. Don't stop making fanart. Be cringe. And use stuff like Nightshade or the possible new models to protect fanfics and hope it poisons the model. Or write cringey nsfw fics of mpreg and crazy ass smut, and watch the ai burn itself to the ground from it.
Just don't give up on art. The ai bros and the model itself relies on YOU. They're NOTHING AND WILL BE NOTHING WITHOUT YOU!!!