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hey i was hoping for some advice on how to stop planning fics and actually START?? like i feel like i have to plan out every chapter and then just feel paralysis at actually starting at the fear of the fic derailing into something else (which is part of the beauty ik) any advice helps :’(

HELLO NONNY! First of all, totally flattered you'd want to come here for advice. Second, gosh, yes, this is one of the most difficult parts of fic writing. Happy to try to help out, though this might get long!

So I see that you're primarily concerned with multi-chaptered/longfics here! It's been a minute since I've hunkered down to work on one of those myself--but this is a good warm-up question for me, as I've got a couple current ideas (including original work) that would necessitate more long-term planning.

When you're writing and publishing a longfic, you pretty much have three options, each with a varying degree of rigidity.

Plan your entire fic (however you like--outline, flow chart, etc.!) and finish writing it in its entirety before posting on a schedule per chapter. Benefits here include the ability to let your plot/characters grow organically without being bound to something you've already posted. No worries about a plot "derailing" if you're able to course-correct something earlier in the midst of it! Also, you're able to write in genuinely any order in this case. Downside, though, is that motivation can be a struggle here.

Plan your entire fic roughly and start writing at the beginning. Give yourself a few chapters of leeway (maybe 3-4 ahead of posting??) and post on a schedule while working on future chapters. You'll still be able to account for organic growth, here, but you are more bound by items that have already been posted. A good plus, though, is the motivation you might get from readers along the way.

Plan your entire fic, start writing at the beginning, and post chapters as they're finished without leeway. GREAT for feedback, but it's super easy to get yourself stuck as new ideas develop.

For an original work with the goal of publication, obviously, I'd use option one. For fic writing and posting on AO3, though, I'd make it my goal to pursue option 2. It's a really nice balance of keeping yourself and your plot on track but also picking up some sweet serotonin along the way.

Regardless of your posting method, it also seems like you'd benefit from hearing how I plan longfics in general. Using a typical indentation format, I start with the bare-bones structure of the plot to help determine chapter breaks (which can change as the actual writing occurs) and overall actions. Once I have the main ideas spelled out, I'll go back and fill out each section into as much detail I have in mind at the time. This will definitely vary chapter section by chapter section. Some ideas will already be specifically developed! Others might stay bareboned.

From there, I head to the opening chapter, as I personally write in order (you might not!). I'll fill in the chapter section with as much detail as possible (scenes, dialogue, in-depth prose notes, etc.) to make actually writing out the chapter as easy as possible for me. Using an excerpt from one of my longfic outlines, here's how a ready-to-be-written chapter section might look:

also note how messy they actually are lol

Once I have that level of detail done, I'll write the chapter. It really helps because while the planning was still "planning," it becomes a lot easier to translate the Plan into actual prose. After the chapter drafted and then finished, I'll move on to the next section and flesh it out exactly the same way before writing. Rinse and repeat!

That way, I have my overarching framework all good to go, but the little living details are the ones that can change as the work itself is completed! I think it's a happy medium between rigidity and natural flow, in which neither really impedes the other.

Bottom line, though? Best way to start writing is to just start. Easier said than done, and something that's really hard for my brain to accept as well. It's a universal struggle. But when you find the tools that work for You, it's fantastic!

God this got so much longer than I intended. Apologies and thanks if you sat through all of this without your eyes glazing over. As for me, I'm off to keep agonizing over planning and actually starting various one-shots, lmao.

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My first lesbian experience

Welcome to my first girl-on-girl experience. I want to share this experience with you all and I do hope you enjoy it.

I was out clubbing down town with a few friends on a Saturday night. It was summer and a beautiful evening. I had been curious about women for such a long time and the warm weather didn’t help my urge for a woman,most of the girls had short skirts and skimpy tops,plenty of leg and cleavage on show for me to ogle,but i never thought in a month of sundays that my girl on girl virginity would be popped tonight.

I had been dancing and drinking and having such a laugh. I was about 19 year old and the warm weather was making me horny. The bar was packed and rubbing past the sexy girls to get from the dance floor to my friends was just making me hornier and hornier.

I returned to the table my friends were sat at and said to my best mate “i’m just going to the toilet don’t go anywhere till i get back hun” “ok” was her reply.

I walked into the toilets and saw two lasses sat next to each other on the sinks. I saw their hands quickly move from being held together, to by their sides. Strange i thought as i closed the cubicle door behind me, are they gay i wondered as i was sat on the toilet are they just good friends, are they like me and just curious about going with another girl.

After using the toilet, I went to the sinks and thought, “I have to chat to them”. I opened conversation asking if they were having a good night and talked about how nice a day it had been, while I washed my hands. I was getting to that almost-drunk stage and was talking complete utter nonsense.

The brown haired lass had the most sexy curley brown, long hair, while her girlfriend had pale skin with black hair.

The brown haired one, which I found out was called Selina, was so sexy. She was so my type of girl. After talking to them, she asked if I wanted to go back to theirs. “hell yeah!” I thought.

“Sure, I’ll just let my friend know Im heading off”. I replied

Off I went to find Kayleigh – she was still engrossed in a couple black men she had started talking to.

“Kayleigh!!” I shouted above the loud music, “I’m heading off, Im pished so Im getting a taxi home. Tell the others aswell”.

“‘course babe”, she replied with a hug.

Off I went looking for the two girls, knocking back my drink and leaving the bottle on the table, as we headed out the club. The 3 of us walked for what felt like an eternity back to Selina’s house, them two holding hands and talking about something between themselves. Staggering along the road in my heels and tiny skirt, they started arguing about some family matter and Mel, the dark haired lass, accusing Selina of something.

“Oh no, what have I come into here?” I thought.

After about 20mins of walking, we landed at Selina’s house. Selina was excited of her dog giving birth to some pups. I’m not a dog person, but was happy for her.

“Abbi, do u wanna come with me and walk the dog?” asked Selina.

“Yeah, sure”, I answered.

“Mel, do u mind sorting out the pups please?” Selina asked Mel, and off Mel went to feed them bottled milk.

We headed towards a park and walked along the grass. The park had a row of houses overlooking and it had no fencing round the park. I checked my watch – 2:10am. I started to sober up a bit, so thought I’d exaggerate on me feeling tipsy.

“Oh Im knackered” I said, dropping to the grass and laying on my back. Selina responded just how I hoped, she lay next to me, let the dog run about nearby, having it’s lead still attached.

Next thing I knew, we started kissing. Her hand slipped up my top and started playing with my tits, gently caressing one….then onto the next. Nervously, I did the same back to her firm, what felt like D cup tits. “Oh, this is AWESOME”, I thought. I was so into her, kissing her more passionately, oblivious to the over looking houses. We then started fingering one another while laid next to each other. She was so wet!! I really wanted to lick her wet sweet pussy, but was too nervous. her fingers in and out of my pussy, making me wet. It was so thrilling. She had my top and bra off and sucking on my nipples, making me move back onto my back,i wanted her to be on her back but that would happen eventually.after what seemed like a age she stopped licking my nipples and moved down my body to position her head between my legs,she pulled my thong to one side, i could feel her breath on my pussy, her tongue darted out and flicked my clit then again, and again, i was in heaven, sliding her fingers in and out of my pussy her mouth was now clasped around my clit licking furiously on it her other hand gently squeezing my nipple i pushed her head harder on to my pussy and wrapped my legs round the back of her head,she was going no where,after what seemed like a age she came up for breath, now it was my turn.

I rolled her onto her back and released her tits from her bra,i was right, they were big ..i started to roll her nipples between my fingers then lowered my mouth onto her nipple flicking it gently with my tongue, i alternated between each nipple,after i few minutes and the desperate urge to finally taste pussy i nervously lowered my head, taking her thong of i lowered my head, this was it, iam finally going to taste pussy it’s no longer a dream it’s there inches from my face, i kissed her pussy then slipped my tongue into her hole sliding my tongue between her hole and her clit,everytime i touched her clit she moaned, i did to her what she did to me, licking her clit and sliding a finger into her pussy then 2 fingers…in and out finger fucking her while i licked her clit i nibbled her clit, by now she had both her hands on the back of my head pushing me harder onto her pussy, her hips were moving in time with my licking, she tasted so nice after about 15 minutes of doing this Selina said we better head back, we had a quick kiss then we both got dressed, and headed back to the house.

On arriving back, mel was having a can of lager and gave me and selina a funny look,the type of look that said “i no what you have been doing, but nothing else was said,thankfully.

Selina showed me to the single room where I was sleeping, and said she would see me in the morning,she gave me a kiss then left me to get ready for bed.

“There’s some lesbian magazines in the cupboard next to the bed,have a look if you want”,”thank you” i replied, “Good night”, she smiled, while closing the bedroom door.

I got undressed, got into the bed and looked (rather than read) these magazines she gave me, while wanking at the photos. Before long, I was going to sleep a very very happy girl!

Abbi xx

I got undressed, got into the bed and looked (rather than read) these magazines she gave me, while wanking at the photos. Before long, I was going to sleep a very very happy girl!

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