IM ON ZE ROOAAADDDDDDD RRAAAAAAAAAAA
ON ZE ROAD AGAIN JUST CANT WAIT TO GET ON ZE ROAD AGAINNNN
IM GOING FROM TEXAS TO TEXAS!!!!!!
el paso
to dallas
lmao
WOOOOOOO ON ZE ROOOAAAAAAAAAAAADDDD
For the writers struggling to rid themselves of the classic ‘said’. Some are repeated in different categories since they fit multiple ones (but those are counted once so it adds up to 100 new words).
1. Neutral Tags
Straightforward and unobtrusive dialogue tags:
Added, Replied, Stated, Remarked, Responded, Observed, Acknowledged, Commented, Noted, Voiced, Expressed, Shared, Answered, Mentioned, Declared.
2. Questioning Tags
Curious, interrogative dialogue tags:
Asked, Queried, Wondered, Probed, Inquired, Requested, Pondered, Demanded, Challenged, Interjected, Investigated, Countered, Snapped, Pleaded, Insisted.
3. Emotive Tags
Emotional dialogue tags:
Exclaimed, Shouted, Sobbed, Whispered, Cried, Hissed, Gasped, Laughed, Screamed, Stammered, Wailed, Murmured, Snarled, Choked, Barked.
4. Descriptive Tags
Insightful, tonal dialogue tags:
Muttered, Mumbled, Yelled, Uttered, Roared, Bellowed, Drawled, Spoke, Shrieked, Boomed, Snapped, Groaned, Rasped, Purred, Croaked.
5. Action-Oriented Tags
Movement-based dialogue tags:
Announced, Admitted, Interrupted, Joked, Suggested, Offered, Explained, Repeated, Advised, Warned, Agreed, Confirmed, Ordered, Reassured, Stated.
6. Conflict Tags
Argumentative, defiant dialogue tags:
Argued, Snapped, Retorted, Rebuked, Disputed, Objected, Contested, Barked, Protested, Countered, Growled, Scoffed, Sneered, Challenged, Huffed.
7. Agreement Tags
Understanding, compliant dialogue tags:
Agreed, Assented, Nodded, Confirmed, Replied, Conceded, Acknowledged, Accepted, Affirmed, Yielded, Supported, Echoed, Consented, Promised, Concurred.
8. Disagreement Tags
Resistant, defiant dialogue tags:
Denied, Disagreed, Refused, Argued, Contradicted, Insisted, Protested, Objected, Rejected, Declined, Countered, Challenged, Snubbed, Dismissed, Rebuked.
9. Confused Tags
Hesitant, uncertain dialogue tags:
Stammered, Hesitated, Fumbled, Babbled, Mumbled, Faltered, Stumbled, Wondered, Pondered, Stuttered, Blurted, Doubted, Confessed, Vacillated.
10. Surprise Tags
Shock-inducing dialogue tags:
Gasped, Stunned, Exclaimed, Blurted, Wondered, Staggered, Marvelled, Breathed, Recoiled, Jumped, Yelped, Shrieked, Stammered.
Note: everyone is entitled to their own opinion. No I am NOT telling people to abandon said and use these. Yes I understand that said is often good enough, but sometimes you WANT to draw attention to how the character is speaking. If you think adding an action/movement to your dialogue is 'good enough' hate to break it to you but that ruins immersion much more than a casual 'mumbled'. And for the last time: this is just a resource list, CALM DOWN. Hope that covers all the annoyingly redundant replies :)
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heres the question-
do we have prussia and russian empire do friend things but just treat it as 'you're a guest, and my ally' and that's it or they are pretty just standoffish and suddenly theyre skipping through flower fields (russian empire's garden /hj)
@mouse-rain YOU!!! decide for me pleaseeee :(
wife took too long we're going a wheel smh /lh
just kidding haahhahahahahahahhgjgsk
heres the question-
do we have prussia and russian empire do friend things but just treat it as 'you're a guest, and my ally' and that's it or they are pretty just standoffish and suddenly theyre skipping through flower fields (russian empire's garden /hj)
@mouse-rain YOU!!! decide for me pleaseeee :(
wife took too long we're going a wheel smh /lh
i currently have a very hyper stray black kitten using me as a jungle gym and mking it vert hard to type as she is using my fingers as a toy and i am extremely tempted to use her as ask blog material
chat its time for story writing
is it the tism in me that made me do this...a whole family tree finding every single connection between nations...
SO MANNNYY
Castle cleaning day
i mean technically the ask blog that DID follow mine technically sort of kind of volunteered themselves right????
thats how this works right-